Date: 01/04/19 07:47 am Title: Audiobook, Pitching or Catching
Just finished listening to the audio book. All I can say is WOW! What a story. Your attention to detail is astounding. I really liked the emphasis on Lara's breasts.
I think the only thing I'd have done differently is to have Lara lay down the law with Gabriel. No other women, no rough stuff, equal partners. And - put a ring on it.
During the fight between Lara and Alex I thought Alex might get stuck with the Felix serum syringe. Had you considered going that route?
Your narrator did a helluva job reading with passion and emotion. I thought she was the one having sex.
Your writing style is amazing. Please keep creating these wonderful stories.
Author's Response: Thanks Elron! b29;b29;b29; Interesting idea that Alex might get stuck with the Felix syringe, I hadn't thought of that. Great idea for another story!
Date: 01/02/19 11:21 pm Title: Audiobook, Pitching or Catching
Really enjoyed the original story and Mira did a great job with the narration. Would love to see (hear?) more in the future!
Author's Response: Thanks! You can find the narrator Mira at: http://www.miranoire.com