Date: 02/15/19 04:23 pm Title: Peaches and Candy
A fantastic ending to a great read. I thoroughly enjoyed the mix of different characters and revisiting old characters. I hope the newly introduced characters get their own spinoffs
Author's Response: Thanks. I was surprised this one wasn't more popular but it seems people prefer character development. Glad you liked it.
Date: 01/20/19 08:48 pm Title: Shades of Red
I’ve always loved Kiki and wished she had her own follow up story. Unfortunately, with so many characters, I can’t sympathize or grow attached to any of them besides Kiki. Your writing is great as always, but it’s almost too much of an ensemble cast. I’ll definitely see it through though and try my best!
Author's Response: Thanks for that. I knew that including Kiki would make the other characters pale in comparison. Still, she needed a conclusion and I thought it might be fun to tie it in here. I don't mind experimenting so thanks for your patience!
Date: 01/15/19 07:08 pm Title: Shades of Red
Been reading a bunch of your stories. The longer ones are pretty good with a nice variety and selection of pictures.
One thing though, and I'm actually not sure if this is criticism or not; Pretty much all of the shenanigans your protagonists go through could have been avoided by a two letter word, "no".
I understand that the nature of these stories require that the protagonist goes through with it, or no story, but maybe you could look that over?
Otherwise, apart from some grammatical errors here and there that don't take away from the story, keep up the good work! :D
Author's Response: Hmm, it's something I do think about. There are some, like Desire Oasis or Love and Money where the MC has no idea what's happening. Others, like Hazed where he feels compelled and doesn't see how extreme it will get. Then, still others like A High Note or All In for Charity where he's willing, curious and interested (enjoyment and curiosity plays into most of them at some point). Still, that's a hard part to write, especially if I feel I need to be creative. Oh, and tell me when you see typos! Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 01/15/19 01:21 am Title: Violeta
Love the story development on the new characters. It seems quick and progresses so quickly but you don't feel like you're missing too much backstory.
Wish it was more than one chapter a day though!
Author's Response: I'm glad you think that. They're quick introductions but I hoped they were enough to make sense.
Date: 01/12/19 02:00 am Title: Holly
I think the structure is easy to follow. The pictures help. I don't know why you aren't getting more reviews. I think the most interesting story is the Jessica and Penny story. I think that could have been fleshed out into its own, but it's still good in this setting.
Author's Response: Thanks! I felt that way with a few of them, especially some of the shorter introductions that haven't started yet.
Date: 01/05/19 01:50 am Title: Shades of Red
Wow! I thought Hazed was one of your hottest stories and it already looks as if this segment at least may go the same way. Plenty of scope for a twist or two, of course.
Author's Response: It was fun and a little twisted. Let's see if you like the way this plays out.