Date: 03/08/19 12:51 am Title: Chapter 12
Oak, I really like that you are taking the time to explore this alternative ending. It just seems so realistic in the way you are portraying the characters. I also belive conflict is important to establishing a great story, and you certainly have plenty of that.
Date: 01/09/19 05:31 am Title: Chapter 9
To be honest while I did like the first ending, this one felt somewhat more... real to the story and how it was lead, the other was more like a plot twist. Still, glad you decided to give a different ending and thus giving more of the story to see what happens next. Good work either way ^^