You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: oneanonly_kittykat Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/23/19 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 13

I hope more chapter are to come out soon, as I am loving where this is going .

Reviewer: Hrdknight Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/20/19 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 13

I know you didn't set out for this story to run this long but it just keeps getting better so please give
us more??

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/19/19 02:32 am Title: Chapter 13

Oops!
Well, with the slip of the wrong name and her reaction, they certainly seem like any other couple. Let's see what Garrett comes up with in the way of an apology.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/08/19 12:51 am Title: Chapter 12

Oak, I really like that you are taking the time to explore this alternative ending. It just seems so realistic in the way you are portraying the characters. I also belive conflict is important to establishing a great story, and you certainly have plenty of that.
Thank you.

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/26/19 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 12

I'm enjoying this alternate ending! Thanks for offering this - I felt the other ending was very unsatisfying.

Reviewer: Sherlykaru Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/09/19 05:31 am Title: Chapter 9

To be honest while I did like the first ending, this one felt somewhat more... real to the story and how it was lead, the other was more like a plot twist. Still, glad you decided to give a different ending and thus giving more of the story to see what happens next. Good work either way ^^

Reviewer: Hrdknight Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/04/19 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 9

I really hope there's more of this story yet to unfold. I've not had enough of these two yet, I'm very curious as to what comes next?

Author's Response: Yes, there is much more to come!

You must login (register) to review.
TG Storytime uses the eFiction engine and Vanilla discussions. Design by J6P.