Date: 12/31/18 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
The only thing that seems si-fi is the swap mechanic, otherwise this is a realistic story... especially if you plan to take this the way i think you are: Having him get stuck for some reason, and then follow along with the transgender stuff... There's not anything wrong with the story, but it would be nice to have some kind of pre-chapter note saying that it's partly a realistic story if that's the case (i prefer to stay away from realistic stuff)... I look forward to seeing how you take this... Perhaps there is more you can do with this since it's marked as si-fi? (beyond the swap mechanic)
Author's Response: I see what you mean but I'm pretty sure it's marked "method of change" or something along those lines suddenly waking up as someone didn't seem realistic. I do appreciate the review. I'll see about putting a note.