Date: 01/01/19 02:37 am Title: Part 2
Superb writing, you packed a lot into a relatively short tale, and you told it impeccably. I didn't notice a single spelling or grammar error. It was easy to follow, stimulating, and generally upbeat. I also enjoyed your interjected ruminations, that resonate with me, about how someone might adapt to this kind of change, and how they might experience the nuances. Thank you!