Date: 01/15/19 11:19 am Title: Final Destination
Why doesn't Jake have a Zero Suit? That suit's entire purpose is to be worn under the Power Suit, as a form of flight suit.
Author's Response: Just a bit of creative license. Getting a character naked is harder than it sounds.
Date: 01/14/19 02:18 am Title: Final Destination
Nice start, well-written, not noticing many typos or grammar bugs. Having a little trouble following parts, but maybe that's just 'cause I'm not a gamer (since the video arcade days anyway), and I do run Linux in addition to Windows (grin).
Hoping you explain later how if Matt is secretly setting up his friends and knows what's really going on, he's dumb enough to be the first player defeated.
Author's Response: Let's just say that while it was his plan that started the whole thing, the outcome might not have been exactly what he was expecting.
Date: 01/04/19 01:42 pm Title: Game Night
I happen to LIKE Linux, thank you very much.
Author's Response: So do I, and I'll go back to using it once I don't have to hunt through a forum post from 2013 to find the correct drivers every time I want to view a video file. Until then, it gets to be a punchline.