Date: 12/30/18 01:19 pm Title: A Secret Santa Surprise
The scene where she dresses in the yoga pants got me kinda emotional. I have begun wearing yoga pants as I am trying to feel more like I should. I so wish this potion were real. Thank you for writing this nice fantasy.
Date: 12/26/18 08:20 pm Title: A Secret Santa Surprise
It's a fun little read. I felt attacked right off the bat with all the similarities I have with the main character and that carried pretty well through. It's a little alarming that she's starting off having casual unprotected sex... But I guess it's nice that Diana is accepting and accommodating.
Author's Response: Glad to hear he felt similar, I wanted to make him the sort of everyman that a lot of people could relate to. I tried to make it seem like the combination of hormonal changes and alcohol that made a somewhat perfect storm, but it was also a fairly short story, so I tried to compress it well. Appreciate the advice!
Date: 12/24/18 09:47 pm Title: A Secret Santa Surprise
Liked it. Can you tell me what was in that vial?
Author's Response: tís supposed to be like a Polyjuice potion, but permanent. Itís made with normal, accessible ingredients, but the intent of the creator matters. In this case, Dianaís intention was to turn Rachel into a version of herself but prettier. Instead, it turned Daniel into a femal version of himself, but prettier than he would have normally been.