I love this story! a very good read and different from the other ones
Reviewer: JinxSignedReport Date: 05/31/14 12:24 pm
Title: Part 1
Really good story, long but good. The way you pulled the ending of with the realisation from the brothel owner was great.
Reviewer: xexterSignedReport Date: 09/01/12 12:36 am
Title: Part 2
Wonderful story. Very readable. The dialect was easy to understand and seemed authentic. I'm not a fan of identity death and It looked like you were going there for a bit, but I really liked the end of the story.