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Reviewer: Lailaluvs00 Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 01/16/19 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 4

Interesting idea but So fast, no character Devo, motivations, feelings, desires, explanations of what why when how?

Reviewer: Grabber_blue_5oh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/13/18 11:17 am Title: Chapter 4

Wish I could find some panties like that haha

Reviewer: Wisehoof Signed starstar Report
Date: 12/11/18 03:16 pm Title: Introduction

First of all, grammar, please. Second, John seems very stupid, as he acknowledges the changes a long time after seeing them, and needs proof of his girlfriend cheating on him when she already admitted it. Also, chapters are way too small.

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