Date: 01/22/19 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was pretty enjoyable, with a satisfying ending. I liked the slow reveal that Derek -> Chrissy was transgender, and the twist that she used her father's old wrestling outfit to avoid making the original Chrissy into a trans girl. I haven't seen trans characters very often in Zulo stories.
Date: 12/12/18 02:29 pm Title: Epilogue
Wonderful story and very well written. Maybe someday you could do a short update story like a year into the future :). I imagine a homeless guy finding the medallion and rubbing on the scarf he found to clean it off a little ha. The sign of a good story is to get the readers imagination going beyond the written words and you have done that so well.
Date: 12/08/18 11:59 am Title: Chapter 5
I like the scene where Derek watches his new body at the mirror, and Lily's attitude.
Author's Response: It's a classic scene and a normal reaction. I mean if I were transformed into a new person I'd go look into a mirror. Wouldn't you?
Date: 12/08/18 11:55 am Title: Chapter 4
I really like Chrissy's POV! The female POV is usually forgot in many TG stories, but watching Lilly trying to seduce her works fine!
I like the Daisy transformation too, let's see what happens :D
Author's Response: Thanks. I think one of the things I enjoy about body-swaps is how both the new man and new woman have to struggle. If I were to focus on one over the other it'd only be half as much fun.
Date: 12/07/18 08:51 pm Title: Epilogue
A very nice story, and a bit of a twist on most of the Zulo tales.
I only wish that we could have seen some extracurricular activities of the "new" Chrissy with Eric or John - though the new Derek seems to be busy. :)
Thanks for posting!
Author's Response: As I'm writing I get a "feel" for my characters, more extracurricular activities this soon just didn't feel right.
Date: 12/06/18 03:57 pm Title: Epilogue
Yay! Another fabulous Zulo story. Well done! Loved it. A few typos (who is Greg? grin), but not enough to overshadow the sweet storytelling.
Author's Response: Thank you for finding that typo! It's fixed. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Date: 12/06/18 04:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Should have given you my address to forward to Chrissy so she could send me the medallion. Unfortunately it's too late now as she threw it away.
Author's Response: lol - You know, one of these days I might have to write a story about what I'd do if I found the medallion. So many limits to test. Like, could I learn a new language? A complex skill? What would food taste like with different taste-buds?