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Reviewer: storylovinggamer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/02/18 06:51 pm Title: Gabriel "The rocket" Stevens!

I like this. Could have a bit more length, but i wouldn't mind too much if it didn't as long as the quality either stayed where it's at or got better.

Reviewer: 930310 Signed Report
Date: 12/02/18 04:13 pm Title: Gabriel "The rocket" Stevens!

I see, I interpreted the "centuries old" cars as being made when the great-grandfather started out.
Anyway, you're off to a decent start here. The chapter could hve been a bit longer though.

Reviewer: 930310 Signed Report
Date: 12/02/18 02:18 pm Title: Gabriel "The rocket" Stevens!

How long did the great-grandfather live? If he started things in the 1999 and Gabriel is 20-25 in the 2100s it means that he must have been about 110 or so when he and Gabriel hung out and talked.

Author's Response: The current year is 2064, when Gabriel hung out with his great grandfather he was a child. The great grandfather was born in 1980, so in the 2050s he would have been in his 70s.

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