Date: 01/01/19 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 10
Thank you so much for this story, it was truly a delight. I'm sorry I havn't commented on any of the previous chapters, but I learned from Flowers that your stories are too emotional to not be able to binge the whole thing once it's finished, so I've had to wait until this one was done. It was well worth the wait :3
Date: 12/24/18 04:35 am Title: Chapter 8
2 things, first off i am so glad Keith is supprotive of Jane, i hope that with him saying it will be the last average joes shows means just a name change. And two I was so anxious to read another chapter that i checked the site everday to read it 😂 Love this story so damn much
Date: 12/19/18 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
I do feel sorry for Thalia, I don't know, played the asshole card and found her love by accident. Some people can't win because they constantly trip over their anger, and she gets drunk and does it again.
I don't think Jane loves Sasha, I think she loves Thalia.
Date: 12/19/18 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 7
Poor Jane though, i had a bad feeling about Thalia but this is way worse than i expected. Thalia clearly has some big issues herself, still no excuse for outing someone that way. You just dont do that.
Still a certain justice in it as well, Thalia has shown her true colors.
Kinda hope they will eventually be friends again, though i think love is out of the question after this.
But i dont think Thalia is evil at her core. Just full of real issues she has never tried to work through.
Almost trembling from this chapter, but it was damn good.
Date: 12/17/18 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 6
I freaking called it!!! My stupid excitment aside, I want to say how much I'm loving this story. Much of Jane's journey hits very close to home for me. I hope this one has a happy ending as my personal journey hasn't finished yet and I want to hope that there is a beautiful end to the hard journey.
Date: 12/10/18 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love the story but even if she is supportive i have some issues with Thalia, leaving someone you're in a relationship with, in the way she did. Is not nice, not nice at all.
Then suddenly back and everything is good again, it just feels very wrong to me.
Still kinda know how Jane feels.
Kinda been there, only difference was that my crush wasn't interested in being anything but good friends, after i told her how i felt. Still totally broke me when she moved out of town. Then eventualy we slowly drifted apart.
But if she came back and into my life again, i would be super happy so yeah:P
Never really got over her.
I feel for Sasha as well, so far it feels like she is pushed to the sidelines whenever Thalia is in the picture and she seems like a really good friend.
Does make an interesting story, right now it is impossible to tell what will happen.
I'm hoping some juicy drama!:P
Date: 12/01/18 03:37 am Title: Chapter 4
>but I saw her for the first time in that changing room.
This is whole sequence in the dressing room is really well done, and very true to life. We've all that moment where we truly see ourselves for the first time.
Also, the dynamics between Jane and Thalia, especially Jane telling Thalia she just doesn't want to be alone, melted my little gay heart
Date: 11/17/18 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
>What the hell was I supposed to even say to that? ‘No worries, so am I!’
Yes Jane, that's *exactly* what you're supposed to say. Us lesbians love finding each other.
>just wait til the estrogen kicks into gear, he was gonna have way more emotional me than he’d ever bargained for
Hasn't Jane been on estrogen for a year now?
Nitpicks aside, I really like this story, and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Date: 11/17/18 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
Very good begining.
I shed a tear at the reunion, if not exactly the same i feel like i have been there.
And it definitly feels very realistic.
Even if i feel like there is no recipie for that, people are very different and so are transitions.
Really like the story so far, have a feeling this won't be an easy ride.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: 11/13/18 02:41 am Title: Chapter 1
I didn't get a chance to comment on your other story (which is incredible lovely by the way, thank you so much for writing it) but this is so far very excellent. Especially digging the fact that the main character is latina (unless I'm mistaken?) I hope Jane and Thalia have a wonderful adventure together. I love romance stories and I love that you've chosen to grace us with more.