Reviews For Growing Pains
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Reviewer: Andrew5000 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/07/19 11:59 am Title: Daddy's home

incest is hot, we need more incest tg stories here. i hope he becomes his dads new slut daughter wife

Reviewer: Greatsage Signed starstar Report
Date: 07/05/19 05:24 pm Title: Daddy's home

This is starting to fall apart, I'm not a big fan of incest and it seems to have come out of nowhere, I get that there are mental changes going on but you are doing it too fast, it lacks subtlety and finesse and this makes the plot lose coherence. There's the potential of a good story here but you need to get a grip on the story telling process.Personally, I'd ditch this latest chapter and rewrite it with major changes but it's your story so do what you like.

Reviewer: Terrigen Signed starstar Report
Date: 07/01/19 05:17 pm Title: Daddy's home

So after this chapter I’m out. I see that it is in the story tags, but I didn’t see that before. You had a good start.

Reviewer: sourmashwhiskey Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/20/19 07:36 pm Title: A hairy situation

Pretty cool story! I am loving the slow torture that the main character is enduring.

Reviewer: footfetishmaster69 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/12/19 01:32 am Title: The booby trap

i love this story and really hope you write more, maybe he could become younger?

Reviewer: Terrigen Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/09/19 04:24 am Title: Stay BRAve Ryan

Not sure why no one has reviewed this yet, but I want to see where this goes.

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