Date: 09/22/19 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 21 Lori still shows no signs of remembering she was a man before .
Almost graduation time, and Steve and Lori seem like the perfect high school couple. Is there still time for a prom? I can see Steve and Lori being crowned king and queen.
And what about her mom's creeper boyfriend? No mention of him in a long time. I figured he was going to assault Lori and get her pregnant - with her mom's blessing. Seems like the story went a different direction without him. Maybe Steve is now playing the past of the sperm donor for mom's plan?
Looking forward to more of this story. Thanks.
Date: 07/27/19 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 21 Lori still shows no signs of remembering she was a man before .
Seems like life has become just perfect for Lori. She has everything she wants, and no sign of Larry anymore. I get the feeling that all that bliss will have to come to an end sometime.
Date: 12/03/18 03:25 am Title: Chapter 12 Larry almost gets kidnapped by Mr Rocco's main goon
Great idea having a backup tracker in her shoe.
Now it would seem Steve and his family are also in peril, since Lori has been stationary in their house for a while, presumably with those tracking shoes.
Date: 11/19/18 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 9 I talk Larry in to wearing his first bikini swimsuit .
Roger really seems to be perving on his girlfriend's daughter. Seems like 'mom' would be really pissed at him. I thought her scheme was to have a high school boy knock up her 'daughter'.
It also seems like the ex-wife's house would be one of the first places for Mr Rocco's goons to look for Lori.
Can't wait to read more. Thanks for writing.