Reviews For Zekken
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Reviewer: Peaceflower Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/27/18 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Beggining Of A Champion

I like where this story is going, i like how you are trying to describe the battle scenes in detail but your plot seems a little bit rushed. Its not a problem but is a suggestion i think would make your story a whole lot better

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