Date: 11/26/18 01:33 am Title: Chapter 1 The Death of our Daughter
A really amazing story in the first few chapters. Unfortunately,y the story doesn't make much sense anymore in the last ones. all the great forced elements are gone. all the horror gone. all the trilling interested aspected of this story gone.
Date: 10/26/18 11:58 am Title: Chapter 1 The Death of our Daughter
"Realistic Sex Change?" REALLY?!!? Uhm, no. Any "sex change" that involves vaginal transplants and cow-teat implantation is science fiction. At best. In this case, it's a poorly-written fantasy wherein "doctors" sound like New Jersey thugs and grieving parents are completely willing to replace their dead daughter with the man who caused her death. Ridiculous.
Date: 09/28/18 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 6 Jeff goes on his first date and finds out he hates his old self, wanting a new life ..
ohhh so nice, it's quite exciting noticing the change of mindset for Jeff especially trying to make things better. Great work, can't wait to see what happens after this =D
Date: 09/22/18 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 1 The Death of our Daughter
It's hard to imagine all the medical people that would have to keep quiet to pull off something as unethical (however righteous) as this transformation is. However, you're doing a good job with the plot. Thanks for writing.
Date: 09/20/18 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 1 The Death of our Daughter
Another poorly written sick horror this site is famous for. Well, the plot seems almost identical to The skin i live in so far. Guess, I hope for the same ending. Not sure what else can Jeff do, aside from slaughtering his tormentors.