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Reviewer: Faye Kistry Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/16/18 05:24 pm Title: Player One

A very seductive start, and nicely written. I look forward to seeing more.

Thanks for sharing your imagination with us. :-D

Reviewer: damare8 Signed Report
Date: 09/15/18 07:00 pm Title: Player One

Interesting start, I wonder what will happen to him.

Reviewer: ThePro Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/13/18 08:47 pm Title: Player One

You have a very good writing style, and this is a promising start. You also have a talent for getting the reader in the head of a horny young guy, although maybe that's not that hard in much of this audience's case. Can't say much more until the story goes further.

Reviewer: Grabber_blue_5oh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/13/18 06:16 pm Title: Player One

Hmm interesting

Reviewer: evenrude Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/13/18 01:40 pm Title: Player One

Moves a little fast, but interesting.

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