Date: 01/01/19 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 9
The story was really good. I enjoyed it very much. Although I figured out the twist by middle of chapter 3 so I wasn't that surprised. Happy new year by the way.
Author's Response: Thank you. If you follow the alternative ending, you'll find a different twist. And Happy New Year to you!
Date: 11/19/18 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 9
Excellent story with an amazing twist at the end. Great job.
I have to admit, though, that I never quite understood what Gemma did to Garrett a long time ago that caused all that anguish and bad felling. Did I just miss something?
Date: 11/19/18 10:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Nice work, Oak! And many thanks for the props. So unexpected to see my name there in the End Notes; a lovely surprise!
Author's Response: Thank you, Amanda. I'm flattered that such a gifted writer liked my story. I hope some of the readers who are unfamiliar with you start working their way through your extensive collection.
Date: 11/15/18 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved the ending. It was clearly a possibility all along and it was very satisfying how everything turned out. In my opinion it was definitely the best twist and made the story much better. That said, this is a story for which I think a alternative ending would be fun to read. Something like a final chapter in an completely alternative universe where it had been Jeremy through all those interactions all along. I’m not saying that’d be a better ending, but I’d like to check how it would play out.
Author's Response: You suggest a very interesting idea. I've begun an alternate, and much longer, ending. This will be a good deal more complicated since I now have two Gemmas to contend with!
Date: 11/15/18 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 9
Incredible story! The fact that it was in the end not totally TG themed took nothing from the story at
all in my opinion. In the ending I was just chapters I was just wishing there was a way that these two
could be together. It wasn't even that much of a shock that Jeremy was sitting there on the couch.
Great story! Thank you for a very enjoyable read.