Date: 01/04/19 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 14
Happy New Year. With all of the new abilities of the remote this could be lots of fun. However there should be drama. Everyone should want something. So what does Brandy want? Does she want to be the male in the relationship? Does John want to be female in addition to wearing women's clothes? If they can be anyone from TV can Brandy become Thor and John become Sif? Do they have the powers of the people from the show or are they normal but look like the characters? Is there a secret agency out there trying to track down and retrieve them? Have people in the past misused them? Stolen other people's lives? (i.e. The rich and famous?) There are as many possibilities as you can imagine. Cheers - Zapper
Date: 12/04/18 03:25 pm Title: The new house
Hmm. What about swapping specific information like names? Also isn't there a duplicate button so one could duplicate the effect between multiple people?
Maybe the father or mother knows more functions of the remote and could show them. After knowing their son is a girl now they might like to change her prespective.
Possibly holding two keys down at once brings up more function.
Well keep writing. I am enjoying the story and looks forward to each episode.
Author's Response: Swapping names is something that I did consider, the only issue with that is it would be very confusing for the audiance. I am also trying to think of more functions that John's parents are going to show them.
Date: 10/23/18 07:07 pm Title: The new house
Truly one of my favorite stories on this site, a lot of which has to do with all the creativity in the swaps. Adding Amanda in could be a ton of fun and make for some interesting trades, especially if the main characters try to get back at her. Brandy with Amanda's orientation, and John with Amanda's body could ruin her plans, and provide a lot of fun.
Date: 10/17/18 03:02 pm Title: It can do that?
You are just starting to go into the world of transformation in so many ways. John needs another odd change. He should be Brandy's panties, or better yet a short sleeve body suit that she wears. Then he could affect her, but be so limited in his form. Good Story. Go as kinky as you like.
Date: 09/07/18 10:48 am Title: The new house
The story is great, but I'd suggest working on your formatting a little bit. You should start a new paragraph each time a new speaker talks. That'll break up some of the huge blocks of text you have with these back and forth conversations.