Date: 09/05/18 03:53 am Title: Chapter 5 - A New Friend
I'm not too picky about plot with this kind of story. Just so long as it isn't stupidly ridiculous, which a curse gone awry and no longer being punitive is definitely not stupidly ridiculous. Just so long as it now gets a satisfactory conclusion. The curse wears off, is removed, or revoked leaving those involved with the changes, maybe reversing it all, or something else entirely like another curse. Which could just so happen to set up a sequel, for you or another author. JUST FOR THE LOVE KINKS, FINISH IT BEFORE WE ALL DIE OF OLD AGE, PLEASE!
P.S. maybe retcon in some more in terms of the actual setup if you ever want to take this on a more serious path. I remember it being not weak, but definitely not a strong.
Date: 08/30/18 12:04 am Title: Chapter 4 - Out and About
So did Freya's imagination turn the salesgirl into a lesbian? She knew enough to pick up the freshly birthed panties when she walked into the changing room. The Force is strong with this one.
Still want a new car though :)
Date: 08/26/18 04:09 am Title: Chapter 3 - Giving Birth to an Idea
As a trans woman, I can say that 1) this story is somehow hotter than it has *any* right to be, and 2) I'm not really sure how to process that fact :-P
(although, speaking from experience, if a dude's deepest desire is to be a girl, he probably *is* one, he just hasn't realized it yet...)