Date: 12/05/18 05:37 am Title: C1-4: Dual Roles
This has potential, but i feel like the introduction went on too long, and it wasn't very clear. Felt like a cheesy remake of transformers or something from a third party film company... I mean, i get it, you gotta take down the bad guys, but i felt like the character should've fallen with the first mega suit thing... This treason thing sounds kind of cheap.
Author's Response: Thanks, gamer. It is dragged on for too long for my own liking too. Nevertheless, I couldn't really go on without giving the characters some memorable spotlights, especially the ones whom I intend to make return later.
Date: 08/22/18 10:28 pm Title: C1-2: Moral Displacement
Oooooh so this is a series about villain protagonists. I'm loving it, uh oh though Officer Coral might be a problem, what is our evil man going to do about it?
Author's Response: Orders are orders, he'll have to think of a fitting punishment for her.