Date: 08/11/19 05:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Finally a good story on here, I totally gave up actually. YES. Awesome plot. I truly hope you will continue writing dark forced stories like this one, please, you have to. Because they are so damn rare. I would totally love to get an email from you by time too if you want. But this story was amazing. Would totally enjoy more stories in the futute, with forced fem, surgery, nbimbofication, forced sex, and turning a totally straight man into a gay one, and him hating everything, and going through hell. Amazing story. would give 100 stars for this.
Author's Response: Thank you very much :) I appreciate your kind words and I agree with you. Stories like that are too rare. If I had more time and my English skills were better I would write more stories. I'll try though :)
Date: 08/16/18 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 4
I really like the concept here, where a loved one has to deal with the devastating changes wrought by some evil scientist and I really want to see all of the changes you have in mind.
Intellect loss is hard to do with first person, but I think doing it as pieces of first person could work and I look forward to seeing how you handle that. And, then, there is Jenny's perspective.
The most interesting part of this, of course, is how they handle Lola's return. I'm not sure if you plan to reveal post TF stuff, but I do hope you do.