Date: 11/10/19 04:42 pm Title: Bavarian Stylings
"He'd become his own vision of feminine perfection— and he loved it." I think that's why I'm enjoying this story - the main character is enjoying sit, so that makes the reader have fun as well. And she can magically conjure beer into an empty glass. The perfect girlfriend.
Date: 11/10/19 12:28 pm Title: The Divine Spark
Interesting development in Chapter Two. This is the kind of magic I can support. I was wondering about what effect his being utterly sloshed would have on the summoning. Would he attract a goddess of partying like Dionysus? It seems so. And orgies? I'm hooked now.
Date: 01/19/19 11:00 pm Title: Epilogue - In With the New
Oh, the gradual change of Cassie's thoughts and gender... I think I might have a bigger thing for mental changes than I thought. Too bad when it comes to real life changing a mind is a no-no, what's authorized being at best discovering thoughts that were there all along :p Hurray for fiction~
Gosh, that was excellently written.
Date: 09/17/18 01:59 am Title: Epilogue - In With the New
Awww, a lovely ending to a warm story. I really like how nobody got set up as ‘the villain’. Everyone was trying with the best intentions and made mistakes, and ‘all's well that ends well.’ Including the girl getting her girl.
It might be interesting to see what Mercedes is doing with herself, but for right now, this story feels complete.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 09/06/18 04:17 pm Title: Epilogue - In With the New
Alas, all good things must come to an end. This has been an incredible journey for Chad or the now Cassie. Thank you so much for sharing the story. Will there be a sequel?
Author's Response: You're very welcome. I enjoyed writing it, and am glad people enjoyed it. No plans as yet for a sequel, but you never know when inspiration might hit!
Date: 08/31/18 09:15 pm Title: Life Goes On
Wow, Chad's/Cassie's life just gets better and better. After reading the last chapter, I think I would probably jump at the chance to become a magical beer Goddess.
Author's Response: Pros: good outfits, attractive, free beer, drink all you want and never have a hangover. Cons: back ache, lengthy hair routine, constantly getting hit on by drunk guys. On balance, I'd take it. ;)
Date: 08/31/18 10:58 am Title: Life Goes On
I’m loving this story, and I really dig this new direction. A change is one thing, but making it part of her life, being a real person after the change, gives it all the right notes for me.
Author's Response: I definitely wanted to leave Chad/Cassie with opportunities to grow as a person and as a divine being, hence this chapter. However, I will be wrapping the story up shortly, I'm afraid.
Date: 08/31/18 12:36 am Title: Life Goes On
My only real complaint is that you said this would only have a dozen chapters or so. I really want to see this continue further. It's unique, engaging, and well-written.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm afraid it is almost over now-- though I've enjoyed writing the characters and doing a little world-building, the TG aspect of the story is nearing its natural conclusion. One more chapter and an epilogue left.
Date: 08/26/18 05:13 am Title: Coming to a Head
This has been a great idea for a story. The actions of the girls to summon deities could be inspiration for other stories in the future.
The 'vision' experienced by Jake is intriguing. I hope more of that comes up in the story.
I think the Beer Goddess could have more stories in the future, maybe creating other beer maidens either accidently or on purpose.
This story has so much potential, Thank you for writing.
Date: 08/25/18 07:22 pm Title: Coming to a Head
I just wanted to say this story inspired a conversation amongst my friends of what goddesses we'd become if the ritual was performed on us :-P
Looking forward to the final chapters!
Author's Response: Wow, that sounds like some conversation! You might be interested to know that my first conception of this story had multiple boys transforming into different Goddesses, but I pared it down to the one I liked best. Final chapters coming soon-- apologies for the delay, I decided that the coming chapter needed a rejig.
Date: 08/18/18 01:00 am Title: The High Priestess
I too often refresh this page to see an update. I hope the story can last for a long time, it's that good.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very happy that my longest story so far is still hooking people's attention. Still, all things must come to an end, and it's only got a few more chapters to go now. I hope you will enjoy them!
Date: 08/17/18 11:38 pm Title: The High Priestess
I wish we could see a picture of Chad as the German beer Maiden - especially after she fills out the top.
I like that Chad is embracing his change, too often the character is resisting to the point of killing the mood. Bring 'em on!
Date: 08/17/18 02:13 pm Title: The High Priestess
i still would like to see new powers develop. Despite chad being a goddess of beer, a goddess, at least in my opinion should still be capable of slightly more than what their powers are focused on...
Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestion. I've just inserted a new chapter into the draft which adds at least one additional power.
Date: 08/17/18 01:42 am Title: The High Priestess
Feels too easy. Not sure where you can go from here. Oh well, folks are enjoying it at least. Just not my cup of tea.
Author's Response: As you say, different people look for different things from a story. Don't feel you have to stick with this one if you're not enjoying it; goodness knows there are enough on this site!
Date: 08/13/18 09:57 pm Title: The Wrong Flat
I have been away from this site for a year and I return to find this gem. I like the balance you strike between comedy and drama, between magic and the mundane. I find the three major characters compelling. Looking forward to the final chapters. Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks! High praise indeed; I'm glad you're enjoying this.
Date: 08/12/18 11:49 pm Title: Bavarian Stylings
Story's not quite going the direction my subjective personal tastes tend to lie, but it's still well written and I'm sure people on the more wish-fulfillment end of the kink spectrum will love it.
I have to say I expected the traditional Bavarian dress to be a one off. I'm glad it wasn't. Not something you see in TG often but it's a wonderful traditionally girly outfit. The dressing scene is a classic sequence, too.
Date: 08/09/18 08:04 pm Title: A Path Unknown
I would have liked to have seen more of this from Chad's perspective. I feel like this is moving a bit fast, skipping a lot of internal struggle.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. I made a conscious choice to portray this particular story from multiple viewpoints, and to move it along relatively swiftly. But don't worry, I've got plenty more stories in me yet.
Date: 08/07/18 10:57 pm Title: The Wrong Flat
Interesting transformation concept, likeable characters, fun scenario. There's some mild grammar errors here and there and I feel like the developments (both character and transformation wise) could be expanded upon a bit more, but all in all this is the kind of story I like to see.
Author's Response: Let me know any specific grammatical errors; I do my best to catch them all but some might still slip through!
Date: 08/07/18 08:35 pm Title: Image and Identity
If Mercedes knew that was Chad instead of Bi, she would totally flip out! :3
His next big challenge would be that the girls will take him out to shopping at the mall. Every eyes would burn at him. Husbands ogling while wives glare. XD
Author's Response: A tempting scene, but Chad knows the power of internet shopping.
Date: 08/02/18 07:34 pm Title: Consequences
Mercedes is my favorite character in the story. XD Chad will surely transform into a outrageously beautiful, buxom Goddess. How will he explain all this to his family?! :3
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Heh, I'm glad you like her; I've got a soft spot for her too. Chad's definitely on his way in that direction, isn't he? More chapters soon.