Reviews For Love Trip
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Reviewer: Lilchelly Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/16/18 06:46 pm Title: A joke, late at night

OMG that stageplay was so sad! I think I may have teared up a little. How tragic... but wow they used the same poem format. Was it a haiku? I'm having trouble figuring that out. Loving this and what they're partners now? What is going on xD

Author's Response: It's just an unrhymed tercet in iambic trimeter (like - / - / - /). No tricks, unless foot substitutions count. No doubt Cyril is also wondering what's going on. It should be clearer in the next chapter.

Reviewer: Lilchelly Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/04/18 08:47 pm Title: Preliminary materials...

This just gets better and better. I cant wait to see what's become of Theodore as well. Are they magical girls going to fight evil or something? This seems amazing!

Author's Response: Yes, they'll fight (against more than clothing), although it isn't evil they're fighting, strictly speaking. The story will have two main external conflicts: one is already introduced; the other hasn't yet appeared. Both are connected, but the fighting belongs more to the latter.

Reviewer: Mr5yy Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/02/18 06:40 am Title: Fee, foe and "fun"

I'm liking were this story is going. I hope you do continue with this.

Author's Response: I hope so, too.

Reviewer: TmC Signed Report
Date: 07/28/18 04:47 am Title: Fee, foe and "fun"

Your writing style is really refreshing. I'm quite enjoying this so far. Besides, I love isekai.

Author's Response: Thank you. Stories here are read for the sake of the transformation, of course, but I did hope mine was entertaining to read, even disregarding that. The isekai plot's bad reputation seems less due to the premise than how it's often executed. And how often it's executed.

Reviewer: Tessarion Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/27/18 04:02 pm Title: Fee, foe and "fun"

This is hysterical (except for man in the restaurant- he's genuinely creep)- well done!

Author's Response: Thanks! It can be difficult to tell whether anyone else will find a story humorous. I simply hoped that the "comedy" tag didn't seem like a case of mislabeling.

Reviewer: Lilchelly Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/27/18 08:09 am Title: Fee, foe and "fun"

OMG this is so cute. So one is a magical girl, what about the other? I cant wait to find out. Also you've got some serious style so I'll be watching your stuff from now on. I really like this premise, I also like qua, she's so sassy it's adorable. I bet little Fee will come around to her

Author's Response: Thanks! As for Felicity coming around to Qua (in a way), it isn't impossible. Despite the former's dislike of it, Qua is his only link to the narrow man.

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