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Reviewer: snowangel Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/19/18 11:25 am Title: Chapter 7 Josh forgets his old past, then surgery

Always wondered if hypnosis really works. It sure fits in with this story. High school should be interesting for her

Reviewer: snowangel Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/15/18 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 6 The Summers meet Josh, who they believe is their missing daughter

This seems to be going to easy. Just have a bad feeling

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Date: 08/08/18 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 5 Josh gets a facial make-over and a new feminine wardrobe

Things should really start to get interesting now

Reviewer: Overlord Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/03/18 01:28 am Title: Chapter 4 I find someone to replace Miss Julie Summers

interesting chapter, but it would have been much sexier, if the replacement of Julie Summers had been a middle-aged dad ;3

I was also wondering, if you could do more stories of middle-aged dads, transformed into preadolescent girls and also into sexy teenage girls, and that they have to deal with their new body, their family and their teenage daughter, please ; 3

I also wanted to tell you that my favorite story, of yours is, "I Want A Daughter And I Ask Dad To Help Me" and it would be great to see more stories like this please ;).

Reviewer: snowangel Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/02/18 07:18 am Title: Chapter 4 I find someone to replace Miss Julie Summers

Ok now I understand what’s going on. Things should get interesting now

Reviewer: snowangel Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/30/18 05:17 am Title: Chapter 3 Meeting someone I will remember the rest of my life

Mmm 3 chapters in and I’m still not sure what’s really going on. I’m intrigued

Reviewer: snowangel Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/25/18 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 2 I locate the missing daughter, but then I let her slip away....

Love a good mystery story. I can understand her side for not wanting to leave though. Be interested to see where you go with this story

Reviewer: Overlord Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/24/18 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 2 I locate the missing daughter, but then I let her slip away....

very interesting story, I liked ; ).
It would be great if he, or another middle-aged dad were transformed into a replica of Julie Summers.

Author's Response: that would surely be dishonest... but what the hell, I'll look around....

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