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Date: 10/12/18 07:11 pm Title: Back to ... Nope, Not Yet

That was the hottest description of sex with a dildo ever!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:10 pm Title: Suckered Again

Patrick needs to dress differently if he's ever going to get people to think of him as a man

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Date: 10/12/18 07:09 pm Title: Fun Out of the Sun IV

That last line - ha ha ha ha ha ha !

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Date: 10/12/18 07:08 pm Title: Fun Out of the Sun III

Soooooooo hot hot hot

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Date: 10/12/18 07:08 pm Title: Fun Out of the Sun II

I don't think I blame you, Patrick!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:07 pm Title: Fun Out of the Sun I

libido on metaphorical vacation. Soooooooo good!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:07 pm Title: Fun in the Sun

Who told?!!!!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:06 pm Title: Start of Trouble

You keep adding characters but in a way that makes it easy to read. I love your writing!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:06 pm Title: Warm Travels

Can't wait to see what happens next!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:05 pm Title: Alone Again

I can't believe you found all these pictures that fit so well. Even his hair is longer!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:04 pm Title: Coco's Second Vacation

I see a bikini coming!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:02 pm Title: The (non) Routine Follow-up

So much for getting back to normal!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:33 pm Title: (non) Routine Check-up

oh no! oh no! What a great and dramatic twist!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:32 pm Title: For Old Time's Sake

is it over?

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Date: 10/12/18 04:32 pm Title: Fast Forward

Wow. Abe's infatuated

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Date: 10/12/18 04:31 pm Title: Last Trifecta

that picture is incredibly hot

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Date: 10/12/18 04:31 pm Title: Last Date Night

I wonder about this clean break

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Date: 10/12/18 04:31 pm Title: The Brass Pony - Inspiration

sooooooooo fun to read this from Coco's view!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:30 pm Title: The Ivy League Girlfriend

Yes! I loved the Ivey League Giirfriend! It's great to see them meet again!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:30 pm Title: Solo

I love your writing. that scene in the elevator was well done!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:29 pm Title: Meow

Yes! Tell us about the brass poney!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:29 pm Title: Last Friday

kitten ears - yes!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:28 pm Title: My Day as a Girl

getting out of control and I like it!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:28 pm Title: Pom Poms

love that outfit

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Date: 10/12/18 04:28 pm Title: Intended Purpose

well, that's a first. Coco is adorable

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Date: 10/12/18 04:27 pm Title: Needs

OMG I want to be coco

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Date: 10/12/18 04:27 pm Title: Oh, Coco

abe is so lucky

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Date: 10/12/18 04:26 pm Title: December Reunion

This can't be the end!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:26 pm Title: She's Arrived

I let the flowery oil seep in and any sense of my maleness out. Chloe - you are amazing!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:25 pm Title: Last Hurrah

OMG - that necklace! It's her name!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:24 pm Title: He Didn't But He Did

Nat! Think about what you're doing! Ha!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:24 pm Title: Walk This Way

he's got tits

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Date: 10/12/18 04:24 pm Title: A Little Less and More Curl

love her hair

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Date: 10/12/18 04:23 pm Title: You Know?

what a night!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:23 pm Title: Connoisseur

OMG, Chloe! That amusement ride thing. Youre the best writer ever! Love it!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:22 pm Title: What is THAT?

I can't believe he's cheating on abe!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:22 pm Title: Charity Date

oh no! What about abe!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:22 pm Title: Getting Ready

what could go wrong?

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Date: 10/12/18 04:21 pm Title: Over, Right?

he's hooked

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Date: 10/12/18 04:21 pm Title: Flight of Fantasy

making the most of it!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:20 pm Title: Missed Connection

Ha! Check your phone!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:20 pm Title: Last Ride

that picture. mmmmmmmmmmm

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Date: 10/12/18 04:19 pm Title: The Other Last Time

Abe's ordering from a menu

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Date: 10/12/18 04:19 pm Title: Last Time

he's really something

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Date: 10/12/18 04:19 pm Title: Everyone Does It

experimenting!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:18 pm Title: Brunch

Patrick has become beautiful

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Date: 10/12/18 04:18 pm Title: Sharing a Bed

so hot hot hot

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Date: 10/12/18 04:18 pm Title: Helpless and Loving It

where do you find these pictures?

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Date: 10/12/18 04:17 pm Title: My First Night Out

lucky abe

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Date: 10/12/18 04:17 pm Title: Spoiled

I love his inner voice. you do that so well!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:17 pm Title: (more) Pretty Man

what a day!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:16 pm Title: On Display

I don't think Patrick's going to want to go back to being himself

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Date: 10/12/18 04:16 pm Title: Pretty Man

like that old movie Pretty Woman. Ha!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:16 pm Title: Paula

makeover time!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:15 pm Title: Single Date

Ha! That sweater! Poor Patrick. he can't get a break!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:15 pm Title: Oh, No!

that was funny

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Date: 10/12/18 04:14 pm Title: Double Date

Ha! He didn't have to kiss abe? Ha!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:14 pm Title: Don't Forget Your Robe

I really feel like I know abe. Well done!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:13 pm Title: I Know This Won't Be My Last

lucky lucky Patrick!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:13 pm Title: First

Its like I can feel what's happening. such great writing!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:12 pm Title: Giving Up

hot picture!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:12 pm Title: Bedtime

Oh my. Patrick, your a gonner

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Date: 10/12/18 04:11 pm Title: What (who) Comes Next

eeeeks! Great ending!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:11 pm Title: Me? Beautiful?

its cute that he doesn't know hes pretty

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Date: 10/12/18 04:09 pm Title: What He Wants

oh my god chloe, this is amazing stuff!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:09 pm Title: Lips

steamy

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Date: 10/12/18 04:09 pm Title: Helpless

so hot!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:07 pm Title: Never Thought I'd Want to be Called Coco

eeeeeeeks! Great chapter!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:06 pm Title: Tea Surprise

oh no!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:06 pm Title: My Boots

nice jeans!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:06 pm Title: Dolled Up

And an epic win! Ha ha ha ha

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Date: 10/12/18 04:05 pm Title: Nat's Piercing

Ha! Epic fail!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:05 pm Title: Proposal

Love love love the way you patiently take us on the journey!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:05 pm Title: Year of the Hats

Patrick has developed nicely!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:04 pm Title: And That Brings Me To...

I like these two!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:04 pm Title: Poor Amanda!

He's really coming along!

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Date: 10/12/18 03:57 pm Title: Spring Glamor

I don't know how you do it. All this should seem impossible but I believe it could happen because of the way you write!

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Date: 10/12/18 03:56 pm Title: Best Friends

he's already trapped! Ha!

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Date: 10/12/18 03:56 pm Title: A Male in my Future?

Love the setup!

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Date: 10/12/18 03:55 pm Title: One More for Good Measure

I see trouble!

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Date: 10/12/18 03:55 pm Title: My Asexual Future

cute picture!

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Date: 10/12/18 03:54 pm Title: Cold

Interesting!

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Date: 10/12/18 03:54 pm Title: Springtime Picture

This is going to be a good one, I just know it!

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Date: 10/11/18 03:29 pm Title: Girl's Night

After reading Coco's comment about the women at the wedding giving advice about sex I pictured the receiving line at the reception. What a hoot that will be when they get to Patrick/Coco!

Author's Response: With the beard, he's hoping the ones who don't know his secret won't recognize him. But the others... who knows what that could lead to?

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Date: 10/10/18 03:30 pm Title: More Therapy?

I like melinda.

Author's Response: Just another average housewife

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Date: 10/10/18 02:38 pm Title: More Therapy?

"No good deed goes unpunished." That could be the title for this story :)

Author's Response: And what punishment it is!

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Date: 10/09/18 08:20 pm Title: Therapy Girl

Hmmmm

Author's Response: :)

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Date: 10/09/18 05:08 pm Title: Therapy Girl

Even if Patrick doesn't compile a list, it might be helpful, sometime before the wedding, if you were to publish a list of all of Nat's family that Coco has been with; and who knows her secret (even if they seem to ignore it). It's getting to be a long list, now with repeats. Bonus - why she believes she got intimate with them in the first place :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you asked! You'll get what you want in one of my favorite scenes near the end!

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Date: 10/09/18 01:49 pm Title: Therapy Girl

Patrick must have been a Boy Scout, he is so willing to help out anyone in their time of need.

Author's Response: So many merit badges!

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Date: 10/08/18 05:21 pm Title: Wrong Turn

Hmmm

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Date: 10/08/18 06:06 am Title: Dress Rehearsal

Oh dear. Guess to complete the circle she needs to sleep with nat and the hubby to be

Author's Response: We'll seeÖ you'd think these people have limits, though!

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Date: 10/07/18 01:36 pm Title: Dress Rehearsal

You had me at the pink bra and panties, then it just got better and better. Can't wait to see how the seduction plays out.

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm pretty sure it's going to play out!

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Date: 10/06/18 07:31 pm Title: Here, Kitty Kitty

Hmm kitty

Author's Response: Purrrrrrrrr

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Date: 10/06/18 06:54 pm Title: Springtime Picture

About time for Coco to get the full girl mod or a new frank and beans.

Author's Response: You would think, right? Patrick has other plans.

Author's Response: You would think, right? Patrick has other plans.

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Date: 10/06/18 12:44 pm Title: Here, Kitty Kitty

I can't believe Coco said no :(

Author's Response: Patrick's saying no

Author's Response: Patrick's saying no

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Date: 10/06/18 12:11 am Title: Fantasy Tutor

I think we know how it will come together, just need to see the way it does!

Author's Response: She doesn't disappoint, does she?

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Date: 10/05/18 11:22 pm Title: Fantasy Tutor

Although Coco's sexual options are limited (only so many ports in a storm), I think you have managed to make each encounter quite unique. Your creativity is boundless. Thank you.

Author's Response: That was part of the fun - making every situation different. We'll see how much more trouble Nat can cause for her old roommate.

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Date: 10/05/18 02:58 pm Title: Fantasy Tutor

Predictable gets alil boring hun. It was good chapters. But everyone she meets she gives head or fucks. X.X

Author's Response: I did my best to mix it up but feel free to skim through the sex. There's a lot more coming (pun intended) but you're going to like the ending. Let me know if you find some of the other encounters more fun.

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Date: 10/04/18 05:54 pm Title: Babysitting

She's getting addicted to dick o.o

He's a football player he gets ass.

Shit I did when I played football

Author's Response: I suppose he's about to!

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Date: 10/04/18 03:53 pm Title: Babysitting

Time for CoCo to get out her punch card...

Author's Response: Anything to help out a fellow man, right?

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Date: 10/03/18 11:11 pm Title: Revelations

Hmmmm

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Date: 10/03/18 07:02 pm Title: The Last Blowjob?

Knew from the beginning. Dots didn't connect. The whole thing was awkward. And everything involving natural has ended in a sex thing that was misunderstood. Oh well
Good chapter :)

Author's Response: Good for you! I didn't want you to think they belonged together but hopefully you can appreciate why Coco stayed with him.

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Date: 10/03/18 02:59 pm Title: The Last Blowjob?

I don't know which is more mesmerizing - CoCo's lips just begging to be kissed, or those eyes that just burn holes into my soul. Wow.

Author's Response: She's a treasure, to be sure.

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Date: 10/03/18 12:38 pm Title: The Last Blowjob?

That does it. If I'm ever trying to defuse a bomb, I'm not asking CoCo which wire to cut.

Author's Response: Ha ha ha ha ha ha!!!

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Date: 10/02/18 07:40 pm Title: I'll Deny It

Sigh, too bad about Abe. I thought they would become a stronger couple as time went on.

Author's Response: Maybe she can do better?

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Date: 10/02/18 04:11 pm Title: I'll Deny It

I think nat gave her the wrong idea lol
I don't think ken is expecting all of this

Author's Response: No, that can't be, can it? ;)

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Date: 10/02/18 03:03 pm Title: I'll Deny It

Ummm, Surly Patrick can't be this ditzy? And I would expect that as "Coco" would be much smarter! I also don't understand why Patrick's doctor is still letting him believe it's still possible for him to be a "man"? ChloŽ dear, when is reality going to catch up to Coco? (Because being Patrick again is just a pipe dream!)
P.S. love the images!
Loving Hugs Talia

Author's Response: In his defense, if you look back at what Patrick (or Coco) hears, there's always something that could lead him to make the mistakes he's making. Then remember that he told us back in college that he had a tendency to get into trouble becuase of his good intentions. But, yes, it's supposed to be silly. I promise it'll all catch up but we still have a ways to go. Enjoy the ride!

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Date: 10/01/18 10:02 pm Title: The New Plan

:( she needs someone

Author's Response: It's the first time one of my characters has been sad. :(

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Date: 10/01/18 07:27 pm Title: My Threesome and the End

I don't think we've seen the last of Abe.
And I'm still trying to figure out how Frank is related to Nat.

Author's Response: I won't spoil anything for you but there's no big surprises coming that I haven't already told you about.

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Date: 09/30/18 03:54 pm Title: Show and Tell and...

Um, wow? Or maybe WTF?

Author's Response: a little WTF is called for, don't you think?

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Date: 09/30/18 01:22 pm Title: Show and Tell and...

?????????????????

Author's Response: Abe, what are you doing?!!!

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Date: 09/30/18 05:21 am Title: Errand Boy

Hmmmmmm

Author's Response: Seems Coco's got a kinky boyfriend.

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Date: 09/29/18 12:29 pm Title: Errand Boy

I do hope Abe doesn't disappoint CoCo. She has worked so hard to get to this point.

Author's Response: She really needs him now...

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Date: 09/28/18 09:03 pm Title: The Older Man - My Savior

Hmmmmm. Coco needs a real connection with someone. Or they are going to have issues. But she is a good choice

Author's Response: She's hoping to get that with Abe. Let's see how that works out.

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Date: 09/28/18 07:13 pm Title: The Older Man - My Savior

As the plot thickens the temperature keeps going up. Your writing is perfect and the pictures just launch it into orbit.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! A new twist is around the corner.

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Date: 09/27/18 04:05 pm Title: Night Off

Yum

Author's Response: Coco does find herself in some juicy situations

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Date: 09/27/18 03:54 pm Title: Springtime Picture

What she needs to do is get a bit more particular. Instead of dumping what she seems to love, she should embrace it.

Author's Response: It's obvious to you and to me but, alas... Patrick doesn't get it.

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Date: 09/26/18 06:56 pm Title: Heels Off, Enter Patrick

Uh oh

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Date: 09/26/18 04:30 pm Title: Springtime Picture

Well, not really a surprise, the inevitable has occurred. Now let “CoCo” try the “other side” for a change. Might as well make it with the whole family, except for his roommate, of course...

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Date: 09/26/18 04:29 pm Title: Springtime Picture

Well, not really a surprise, the inevitable has occurred. Now let “CoCo” try the “other side” for a change. Might as well make it with the whole family, except for his roommate, of course...

Author's Response: Poor Patrick... he's really going to try!

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Date: 09/26/18 03:28 pm Title: Heels Off, Enter Patrick

This encounter is shaping up to be the most sensual (so far). Or the shortest. Can't wait to find out.

Author's Response: Oh, it won't be short...

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Date: 09/26/18 03:25 pm Title: Counting Down the Time

I have no idea what you call that white outfit, but your taste in clothing is incredible.

Author's Response: Ha! Yeah, Coco had trouble naming it, too!

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Date: 09/25/18 06:55 pm Title: Pinkmail

Oh dear

Author's Response: Just one "problem" after another.

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Date: 09/25/18 02:47 pm Title: Pinkmail

Wow, Chloe, I'm running out of adjectives to express my praise for your storytelling skills. Please excuse me if I start to repeat myself.
Just when it seems like this story couldn't get any steamer, you find a way.
When you need another way for CoCo to mistakenly get into an intimate situation with another of Nat's family, you find a way.
And finally, some writers struggle to put out a chapter a week, a month, or to even finish a story. I can imagine how hard it must be to get your thoughts organized the way you want. But with you I find myself checking for updates several times a day.
Chloe, you never disappoint!

Author's Response: You are so sweet! It was fun coming up with new ways for Coco to find herself in bed with yet another family member. It helped that the story's a bit of a comedy and not to be taken too seriously. There's still a few more relatives to go!

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Date: 09/24/18 05:12 am Title: This Hair!

Oh dear

Author's Response: What could go wrong?

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Date: 09/23/18 05:29 pm Title: This Hair!

Long hair, of course!

Author's Response: Me, too!

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Date: 09/23/18 05:24 pm Title: Job Security

What's funny are all the misreads between CoCo and Nat's family. Almost like they are all in one giant conspiracy to feminize Patrick.
And you have come up with a different setting for each one. Brilliant!

Author's Response: So glad you like it. Yes, that's the idea (though you'll see the women operate a little differently).

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