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Date: 10/12/18 07:34 pm Title: Night Off

hottest pictures ever! They're perfect! Not quite porn but hot hot hot!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:33 pm Title: Now it's Clear

so much for being the man!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:33 pm Title: Heels Off, Enter Patrick

Is it too late to tell her she can't stay? Ha! I really like Patrick. He's adorable and fun.

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Date: 10/12/18 07:32 pm Title: The Man in the House

its cute that he's trying to be a man

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Date: 10/12/18 07:32 pm Title: Counting Down the Time

wow

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Date: 10/12/18 07:31 pm Title: Pinkmail

I knew she was trouble!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:30 pm Title: Finally Listening

oh no! Patrick cut that hair?

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Date: 10/12/18 07:30 pm Title: Privacy, Please!

Every situation could be a great story by itself!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:29 pm Title: It's Not Just a Party

Oh my! Where do you come up with these ideas?

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Date: 10/12/18 07:29 pm Title: This Hair!

Long!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:29 pm Title: Job Secured

Ha! I'm going to start carrying these ribbons! ha ha ha

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Date: 10/12/18 07:28 pm Title: Job Security

Oh, yes Chloe. There's almost no comedy on this site or any other. It's great!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:27 pm Title: Spectrum

ha ha ha ha ha! I knew it!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:27 pm Title: Turns

I still wonder about John. and that's a great picture!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:26 pm Title: Proof

Ha! Patrick's getting around

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Date: 10/12/18 07:25 pm Title: Evidence!

I love love love the way you wrote about how she got caught!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:25 pm Title: The Do-Gooder

Something tells me this isn't going to end up as Patrick thinks.

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Date: 10/12/18 07:24 pm Title: More Meetings

There's so much going on in this story. I love it!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:24 pm Title: The New Me

Another new character!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:23 pm Title: Really, Really Friendly

Wow. Ken's nice but also a jerk.

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Date: 10/12/18 07:23 pm Title: Really Friendly

I'm surprised that Ken really does need sex for the job

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Date: 10/12/18 07:22 pm Title: Friendly

He's going to make the new boss happy!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:22 pm Title: Qualifying for a New Start

ha ha ha ha ha. He hates parties - I love parties!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:21 pm Title: Autumn Changes II

Oh no! Now he needs a new job!

Author's Response: It'll all work out, I promise.

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Date: 10/12/18 07:21 pm Title: Autumn Changes I

major tits! Jelly

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Date: 10/12/18 07:21 pm Title: Anniversary Shopping

Patrick needs someone to talk to.

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Date: 10/12/18 07:20 pm Title: Happy Anniversary

I love that he sleeps best when he's with guys. nice touch!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:19 pm Title: Someone to Talk To

THese two are so hot for eachother!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:19 pm Title: Part of His Plan?

Two years! Time for the romance to really start with abe!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:18 pm Title: Pacing and Waiting

Those tits have really grown!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:18 pm Title: Resolve

abe has great taste in clothes!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:18 pm Title: The Steamy Mistake

ha ha ha ha ha! Wrong girl! Coco does it again!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:17 pm Title: The Other Steamy Night

Oui! Ha!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:16 pm Title: Oui

Always ready to help!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:16 pm Title: The Setup for a Steamy Night

Finally get to see Nat!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:15 pm Title: Double Date

Girls clothes are more fun!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:15 pm Title: Standard Trip Prep

Patrick's so beautiful

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Date: 10/12/18 07:13 pm Title: Late Resolutions

Poor Patrick. so confused.

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Date: 10/12/18 07:12 pm Title: Lipstick Distraction

Coco's one horney girl

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Date: 10/12/18 07:12 pm Title: Definitely Nope

I have to ask - is that you in the shower?

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Date: 10/12/18 07:11 pm Title: Next Plans

What a great picture!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:11 pm Title: Back to ... Nope, Not Yet

That was the hottest description of sex with a dildo ever!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:10 pm Title: Suckered Again

Patrick needs to dress differently if he's ever going to get people to think of him as a man

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Date: 10/12/18 07:09 pm Title: Fun Out of the Sun IV

That last line - ha ha ha ha ha ha !

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Date: 10/12/18 07:08 pm Title: Fun Out of the Sun III

Soooooooo hot hot hot

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Date: 10/12/18 07:08 pm Title: Fun Out of the Sun II

I don't think I blame you, Patrick!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:07 pm Title: Fun Out of the Sun I

libido on metaphorical vacation. Soooooooo good!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:07 pm Title: Fun in the Sun

Who told?!!!!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:06 pm Title: Start of Trouble

You keep adding characters but in a way that makes it easy to read. I love your writing!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:06 pm Title: Warm Travels

Can't wait to see what happens next!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:05 pm Title: Alone Again

I can't believe you found all these pictures that fit so well. Even his hair is longer!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:04 pm Title: Coco's Second Vacation

I see a bikini coming!

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Date: 10/12/18 07:02 pm Title: The (non) Routine Follow-up

So much for getting back to normal!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:33 pm Title: (non) Routine Check-up

oh no! oh no! What a great and dramatic twist!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:32 pm Title: For Old Time's Sake

is it over?

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Date: 10/12/18 04:32 pm Title: Fast Forward

Wow. Abe's infatuated

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Date: 10/12/18 04:31 pm Title: Last Trifecta

that picture is incredibly hot

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Date: 10/12/18 04:31 pm Title: Last Date Night

I wonder about this clean break

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Date: 10/12/18 04:31 pm Title: The Brass Pony - Inspiration

sooooooooo fun to read this from Coco's view!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:30 pm Title: The Ivy League Girlfriend

Yes! I loved the Ivey League Giirfriend! It's great to see them meet again!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:30 pm Title: Solo

I love your writing. that scene in the elevator was well done!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:29 pm Title: Meow

Yes! Tell us about the brass poney!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:29 pm Title: Last Friday

kitten ears - yes!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:28 pm Title: My Day as a Girl

getting out of control and I like it!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:28 pm Title: Pom Poms

love that outfit

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Date: 10/12/18 04:28 pm Title: Intended Purpose

well, that's a first. Coco is adorable

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Date: 10/12/18 04:27 pm Title: Needs

OMG I want to be coco

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Date: 10/12/18 04:27 pm Title: Oh, Coco

abe is so lucky

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Date: 10/12/18 04:26 pm Title: December Reunion

This can't be the end!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:26 pm Title: She's Arrived

I let the flowery oil seep in and any sense of my maleness out. Chloe - you are amazing!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:25 pm Title: Last Hurrah

OMG - that necklace! It's her name!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:24 pm Title: He Didn't But He Did

Nat! Think about what you're doing! Ha!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:24 pm Title: Walk This Way

he's got tits

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Date: 10/12/18 04:24 pm Title: A Little Less and More Curl

love her hair

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Date: 10/12/18 04:23 pm Title: You Know?

what a night!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:23 pm Title: Connoisseur

OMG, Chloe! That amusement ride thing. Youre the best writer ever! Love it!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:22 pm Title: What is THAT?

I can't believe he's cheating on abe!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:22 pm Title: Charity Date

oh no! What about abe!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:22 pm Title: Getting Ready

what could go wrong?

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Date: 10/12/18 04:21 pm Title: Over, Right?

he's hooked

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Date: 10/12/18 04:21 pm Title: Flight of Fantasy

making the most of it!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:20 pm Title: Missed Connection

Ha! Check your phone!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:20 pm Title: Last Ride

that picture. mmmmmmmmmmm

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Date: 10/12/18 04:19 pm Title: The Other Last Time

Abe's ordering from a menu

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Date: 10/12/18 04:19 pm Title: Last Time

he's really something

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Date: 10/12/18 04:19 pm Title: Everyone Does It

experimenting!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:18 pm Title: Brunch

Patrick has become beautiful

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Date: 10/12/18 04:18 pm Title: Sharing a Bed

so hot hot hot

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Date: 10/12/18 04:18 pm Title: Helpless and Loving It

where do you find these pictures?

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Date: 10/12/18 04:17 pm Title: My First Night Out

lucky abe

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Date: 10/12/18 04:17 pm Title: Spoiled

I love his inner voice. you do that so well!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:17 pm Title: (more) Pretty Man

what a day!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:16 pm Title: On Display

I don't think Patrick's going to want to go back to being himself

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Date: 10/12/18 04:16 pm Title: Pretty Man

like that old movie Pretty Woman. Ha!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:16 pm Title: Paula

makeover time!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:15 pm Title: Single Date

Ha! That sweater! Poor Patrick. he can't get a break!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:15 pm Title: Oh, No!

that was funny

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Date: 10/12/18 04:14 pm Title: Double Date

Ha! He didn't have to kiss abe? Ha!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:14 pm Title: Don't Forget Your Robe

I really feel like I know abe. Well done!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:13 pm Title: I Know This Won't Be My Last

lucky lucky Patrick!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:13 pm Title: First

Its like I can feel what's happening. such great writing!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:12 pm Title: Giving Up

hot picture!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:12 pm Title: Bedtime

Oh my. Patrick, your a gonner

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Date: 10/12/18 04:11 pm Title: What (who) Comes Next

eeeeks! Great ending!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:11 pm Title: Me? Beautiful?

its cute that he doesn't know hes pretty

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Date: 10/12/18 04:09 pm Title: What He Wants

oh my god chloe, this is amazing stuff!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:09 pm Title: Lips

steamy

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Date: 10/12/18 04:09 pm Title: Helpless

so hot!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:07 pm Title: Never Thought I'd Want to be Called Coco

eeeeeeeks! Great chapter!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:06 pm Title: Tea Surprise

oh no!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:06 pm Title: My Boots

nice jeans!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:06 pm Title: Dolled Up

And an epic win! Ha ha ha ha

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Date: 10/12/18 04:05 pm Title: Nat's Piercing

Ha! Epic fail!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:05 pm Title: Proposal

Love love love the way you patiently take us on the journey!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:05 pm Title: Year of the Hats

Patrick has developed nicely!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:04 pm Title: And That Brings Me To...

I like these two!

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Date: 10/12/18 04:04 pm Title: Poor Amanda!

He's really coming along!

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Date: 10/12/18 03:57 pm Title: Spring Glamor

I don't know how you do it. All this should seem impossible but I believe it could happen because of the way you write!

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Date: 10/12/18 03:56 pm Title: Best Friends

he's already trapped! Ha!

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Date: 10/12/18 03:56 pm Title: A Male in my Future?

Love the setup!

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Date: 10/12/18 03:55 pm Title: One More for Good Measure

I see trouble!

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Date: 10/12/18 03:55 pm Title: My Asexual Future

cute picture!

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Date: 10/12/18 03:54 pm Title: Cold

Interesting!

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Date: 10/12/18 03:54 pm Title: Springtime Picture

This is going to be a good one, I just know it!

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Date: 10/11/18 03:29 pm Title: Girl's Night

After reading Coco's comment about the women at the wedding giving advice about sex I pictured the receiving line at the reception. What a hoot that will be when they get to Patrick/Coco!

Author's Response: With the beard, he's hoping the ones who don't know his secret won't recognize him. But the others... who knows what that could lead to?

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Date: 10/10/18 03:30 pm Title: More Therapy?

I like melinda.

Author's Response: Just another average housewife

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Date: 10/10/18 02:38 pm Title: More Therapy?

"No good deed goes unpunished." That could be the title for this story :)

Author's Response: And what punishment it is!

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