Date: 10/11/18 03:29 pm Title: Girl's Night
After reading Coco's comment about the women at the wedding giving advice about sex I pictured the receiving line at the reception. What a hoot that will be when they get to Patrick/Coco!
Author's Response: With the beard, he's hoping the ones who don't know his secret won't recognize him. But the others... who knows what that could lead to?
Date: 10/09/18 05:08 pm Title: Therapy Girl
Even if Patrick doesn't compile a list, it might be helpful, sometime before the wedding, if you were to publish a list of all of Nat's family that Coco has been with; and who knows her secret (even if they seem to ignore it). It's getting to be a long list, now with repeats. Bonus - why she believes she got intimate with them in the first place :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you asked! You'll get what you want in one of my favorite scenes near the end!
Date: 10/05/18 11:22 pm Title: Fantasy Tutor
Although Coco's sexual options are limited (only so many ports in a storm), I think you have managed to make each encounter quite unique. Your creativity is boundless. Thank you.
Author's Response: That was part of the fun - making every situation different. We'll see how much more trouble Nat can cause for her old roommate.
Date: 10/05/18 02:58 pm Title: Fantasy Tutor
Predictable gets alil boring hun. It was good chapters. But everyone she meets she gives head or fucks. X.X
Author's Response: I did my best to mix it up but feel free to skim through the sex. There's a lot more coming (pun intended) but you're going to like the ending. Let me know if you find some of the other encounters more fun.
Date: 10/03/18 07:02 pm Title: The Last Blowjob?
Knew from the beginning. Dots didn't connect. The whole thing was awkward. And everything involving natural has ended in a sex thing that was misunderstood. Oh well
Good chapter :)
Author's Response: Good for you! I didn't want you to think they belonged together but hopefully you can appreciate why Coco stayed with him.
Date: 10/02/18 03:03 pm Title: I'll Deny It
Ummm, Surly Patrick can't be this ditzy? And I would expect that as "Coco" would be much smarter! I also don't understand why Patrick's doctor is still letting him believe it's still possible for him to be a "man"? ChloŽ dear, when is reality going to catch up to Coco? (Because being Patrick again is just a pipe dream!)
P.S. love the images!
Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: In his defense, if you look back at what Patrick (or Coco) hears, there's always something that could lead him to make the mistakes he's making. Then remember that he told us back in college that he had a tendency to get into trouble becuase of his good intentions. But, yes, it's supposed to be silly. I promise it'll all catch up but we still have a ways to go. Enjoy the ride!
Date: 10/01/18 07:27 pm Title: My Threesome and the End
I don't think we've seen the last of Abe.
And I'm still trying to figure out how Frank is related to Nat.
Author's Response: I won't spoil anything for you but there's no big surprises coming that I haven't already told you about.
Date: 09/26/18 04:29 pm Title: Springtime Picture
Well, not really a surprise, the inevitable has occurred. Now let “CoCo” try the “other side” for a change. Might as well make it with the whole family, except for his roommate, of course...
Author's Response: Poor Patrick... he's really going to try!
Date: 09/25/18 02:47 pm Title: Pinkmail
Wow, Chloe, I'm running out of adjectives to express my praise for your storytelling skills. Please excuse me if I start to repeat myself.
Just when it seems like this story couldn't get any steamer, you find a way.
When you need another way for CoCo to mistakenly get into an intimate situation with another of Nat's family, you find a way.
And finally, some writers struggle to put out a chapter a week, a month, or to even finish a story. I can imagine how hard it must be to get your thoughts organized the way you want. But with you I find myself checking for updates several times a day.
Chloe, you never disappoint!
Author's Response: You are so sweet! It was fun coming up with new ways for Coco to find herself in bed with yet another family member. It helped that the story's a bit of a comedy and not to be taken too seriously. There's still a few more relatives to go!
Date: 09/23/18 05:24 pm Title: Job Security
What's funny are all the misreads between CoCo and Nat's family. Almost like they are all in one giant conspiracy to feminize Patrick.
And you have come up with a different setting for each one. Brilliant!
Author's Response: So glad you like it. Yes, that's the idea (though you'll see the women operate a little differently).