Date: 11/09/18 09:42 am Title: Itís Happening!
I tried. Honestly, I did. I WANTED to like this one; the concept is great and the execution really isn't half bad. But Jaysus, the exclamation points! I don't enjoy reading a narrator who sounds like he's screaming every other sentence, and that's exactly what exclamation points in the narrative proclaim. The author may think he's providing emphasis, but all he's doing is making the narrator shrill and annoying.
Honestly, I can't rate this as-is. It is neither good nor bad enough to rate. And there's no way I'm reading any more of it. That'll only annoy me.
Date: 07/25/18 10:56 am Title: A Leap in the Dark
When I try to download this story I get a "404: Page Not Found - This page does not exist" error. Anyone else have that problem?
Author's Response: Is it just to download it or also to view it? If you like I'll sent you the pdf of the story.