Date: 07/16/18 01:51 am Title: Nightmare to Scream for on Friday the 13th
Cute, Josh, a fun read. And thanks for making my being born on Friday, the 13th sound like I should be thankful all I've ever experienced since is mostly disappointment and the word "No." Or better yet, a sign should have greeted my entry to this world that April in 1951, It should have read, "Ye who is born this 13th day of April, upon this world, abandon all hope (of ever succeeding at anything). So, Shawn secretly wished to be a girl. That was certainly an interesting way to achieve it—as a consequence of having been selected as Terrance’s latest playmate. He doesn’t seem all that fazed by the transition at the story’s end near at all.
Date: 07/15/18 03:19 am Title: Nightmare to Scream for on Friday the 13th
Different from the norm. Very different. Entertaining and very well done. I was never quite sure what was going on, or what would happen next. Would Shawn fall victim to all the tropes, or would he manage to avoid them? Great story.