Date: 04/02/19 03:11 am Title: Chapter 11
Thank you Mrs. Nostalgic for updating this story. I think it is a very unique angle and your writing captures the perspective of the old ladies just right. I feel older just reading this!
I can't wait to see how the old ladies do in Paris.
Date: 07/27/18 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is an amazing story. You are capturing the details so well I feel like I am in the story. I can imagine the despair felt by the boys having lost so much. Keep up the great storytelling.
Author's Response: Thank you! I will update as often as I can! /Alex
Date: 07/13/18 09:59 am Title: Chapter 1
In the first paragraph there are a few errors, check the last sentence especially.
Actually, there's something wrong in pretty much all the paragraphs, you need to fix this.
Author's Response: Thank you for making me noticed of these errors. I Will go through the whole text once again to see that I can fix. Probably also rum ut through an editor
Date: 07/13/18 03:06 am Title: Chapter 1
Mrs Nostalgic, you're off to a great start! I don't know how you managed to get the perspective of an old lady, but I am picturing my grandmothers as I read this.
You're right, there are not many young male to old(er) female stories, everyone likes a busty blonde cheerleader. I suggest reading "The New Mrs. Harris" about a 15 year old boy magically turned into a 48 year old woman.
Please keep your story going, let it develop slowly with plenty of details, and we all will become immersed in the tale.
Thank you for taking the time to turn your idea into a story.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! My though was to continue developing the story in a slow pace, following the struggles of the main character.