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Reviewer: Carlee Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/22/18 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great story! Very steamy, and nice that she's not all bald down there!

Reviewer: LillyLove Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/18/18 02:06 am Title: Chapter 1

Good job! I like the take you’re doing on this trope. We’ve seen nanobors before, but your portrayal of his mind giving in is more detailed than I’ve seen before. Nice job so far!

Reviewer: LillyLove Signed Report
Date: 06/16/18 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 2

Hi! Very good story so far. However, there seems to be an error in the upload where your Chapter 1 has been uploaded as the second chapter on the site, so that when people click the story they recieve a blank page with no option for the first chapter. The only way I was able to access your story was by going through your account page to the table of contents. Hope it gets fixed! i really like the idea.

Author's Response: Okay. Thanks for notifying me. : ) I will try reuploading it. This is my first time and I'm not very familiar with the system they are using.

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