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Reviewer: Lilchelly Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/05/19 06:00 am Title: Sonaification

This is a bizarre story but it is also really interesting. The Sonaification and Diane are something I'm trying to figure out. Why does Diane hate them so much? Why do humans merge with toon characters? What is absolutely going on and also is the "acid" dip from Roger Rabbit?

Author's Response: I can't say much without going into major spoilers but I can clarify one things. The acid that killed the sphinx and pixie is dip, the acid from Diane's weapon is not dip.

Reviewer: Archer Signed Report
Date: 10/25/18 04:14 am Title: Cruel Reality

Past tense or present tense; choose one and stick with it.
Also, it seems you forgot to end the italics after the flashback.

Author's Response: Fixed it immediately. Sorry about that, I have to manually put in the story since I have the right txt file format this site requires.

Reviewer: ElalE Signed Report
Date: 06/17/18 06:33 pm Title: When Roland Became Rakita

Thats a good start for this story, though I'll have to wait for it to develop more before saying for sure my opinion about it.

Author's Response: Alright. I'll do my best to make a great impression in the long-term.

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