Date: 10/25/18 04:14 am Title: Cruel Reality
Past tense or present tense; choose one and stick with it.
Also, it seems you forgot to end the italics after the flashback.
Author's Response: Fixed it immediately. Sorry about that, I have to manually put in the story since I have the right txt file format this site requires.
Date: 06/17/18 06:33 pm Title: When Roland Became Rakita
Thats a good start for this story, though I'll have to wait for it to develop more before saying for sure my opinion about it.
Author's Response: Alright. I'll do my best to make a great impression in the long-term.