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Reviewer: Paper Moon Signed Report
Date: 09/30/19 06:03 am Title: OH!...FEM...OH!...LOVE!... ( POEM-SONG )

I believe you're being a bit harsh on the author.

I don't know whether Candy is a good poet or a bad one. I really don't. Whatever she uses as translation software looks like it has managed to be worse than Google Translate. But from what I can piece together from the parts of her poems that are actually legible, I don't believe her written English is doing her justice. It's easy to make fun of someone who can't speak English very well, but there are snippets of emotion in the few parts of her poems that are understandable. She's just held back by her translation software, that's all.

Reviewer: BalletBoyJamie Signed Report
Date: 05/15/18 07:22 am Title: OH!...FEM...OH!...LOVE!... ( POEM-SONG )

Gosh I want to make fun of this one, too, but I've said it all before.

However, if you are going to say it's inspired by somebody's song, at least spell their damned name right, AND the name of the song.

It's one thing to drop acid and mescaline and type random "poetic words" with punctuation set to "random", but at least get your credits correct.

Now, please excuse me while I clean up this unicorn rainbow-barf from my screen....

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