Date: 12/28/18 06:08 am Title: Chapter 28
Nicole, I realized I never reviewed this story. I'm sorry, I can't imagine how much work goes into crafting stories of the caliber you create. The least I can do is take a few minutes to tell you what I think.
'Danielle' is in my folder of favorite stories. It combines time travel, sci-fi, magic, and many other genres of writing. I absolutely love your work.
I believe there are three key elements that lift a good story to a great one. First is detail. You have it in your historical depictions of life in France 200 years ago. I feel like I am right there with the characters. Second is suspense. Every chapter, heck almost every page, seems like a cliff-hanger. The third is conflict. Too many TG stories are boy turns into girl; then rainbows, unicorns and sex. You, on the other hand, manage to put your characters into life-or-death situations. And we are there wishing we could tell them to turn around, or hit the bad guy with a bat. 'Danielle' manages to combine all these elements into a perfectly paced tale that places the reader right into the story. I wish I could say something more profound than 'thank you' and please, please, keep writing. You have a real gift and a talent as an author.
Thanks again, Elron.
PS - I was completely floored to see my name mentioned in your dedication. I don't feel like I did much to earn mention. But seeing my name there made me realize that you authors go through great pains to give life to your stories. I've since gotten better at giving feedback, and hope I can repay you for all your hard work.
Your fan, Elron
Author's Response: Hi this is very very kind of you and not something I feel I deserve but thank you.
Date: 05/21/18 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 27
I am so loving this story ,but the best part is that E town is some place I know well and do not live all that far from there. Only about an hour or so south of there.
Author's Response: That's very sweet. Thank you.
Date: 05/13/18 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 24
One thrilling ride.
Quite fast paced but it fit the story well.
Loved the time jump concept!
Hoping for a few more chapters, would like to know what happens to Sutton and what about her old family other than Georgia? Sad if she can never have contact with them again.
Same with her old best friend.
Pluss i would really like to see some more interaction between Sam and Danielle after the shift.
Overall loved it:) Was a very exciting read!
Author's Response: Thank you. Really constructive feedback I appreciate it.