Reviews For The Deviance
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Reviewer: moonpotrz Signed Report
Date: 02/21/19 11:05 am Title: The Delivery

Still looking forward to an update on this one. The Girl filled update recently was great!

Reviewer: moonpotrz Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/24/18 02:02 am Title: The Delivery

Of the three new ones, this is my favorite. I might just have more of a preference for a more “standard” setting, but her motivation is interesting. I think 666XX also has potential but im personally not as much of a fantasy erotica fan. But i also think you should do you! They are all wonderfully written as usual. This one, my personal interest would be to see more detail than usual on how Ted would react to being pregnant and his continuing body changes after transitioning, but you always have other surprises in store. Either way, strong characters in all of them and thanks for taking on 3 at once!

Author's Response: Deviance might be the easiest to write since it is a true sequel. As a teaser, The Changing got a lot of responses regarding how degraded it was and, fair warning, in a way my goal is to top that. The other two stories are more testing grounds for ideas so we'll see how they stack up to something more established.

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