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Reviewer: Artemesia Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/07/18 01:12 am Title: Robert's Visitor

This was incredible! I so yearn for erotica like this. Cup sizes, boob jobs, and mental warping. Exquisitely written with lush description. Just awesome, one of the best I have read in a while. Will totally check out your page. Your craft deserves to be paid for. (wow, still buzzing....) - A

Author's Response: Thank you Artemisia! I'm so glad you enjoyed this story and I'm so grateful for your review! I hope you'll have fun with my new upcoming story, "The Medicine Man", which is also going to include b****, transformation and mental warping. Also, if you purchased anything from me, let me thank you AGAIN! Your support is highly appreciated and necessary!

Reviewer: LillyLove Signed Report
Date: 04/26/18 05:31 pm Title: Robert's New Body

Also don’t forget to change your story to completed since it’s done!!

Author's Response: I did! Thank you for pointing that out... I took the chance to add one more chapter just for fun.

Reviewer: LillyLove Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/26/18 05:16 pm Title: Robert's New Body

Good story overall. I was a little bit confused by the wording of shirt/skirt (typo?) in the third chapter when his clothing changes.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I corrected a few skirt/shirt typos (thank you for pointing that out!) and I'm glad you had fun!

Reviewer: GassyTiffany Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/22/18 10:48 pm Title: Robert's New Body

I reall love what you made! keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you GassyTiffany! I hope you enjoyed how the story ended. I cannot really say how good it is to receive a review like this... such a wonderful comment, so inspiring! Thank you a lot and I hope I'll see you again on my next story!

Reviewer: IshAsh Signed starstar Report
Date: 04/21/18 05:01 am Title: Robert's New Body

I really wanted to love this story...the categories, tags, the rating are all up my alley in terms of personal preference; however I found myself disappointed. I realize that every TG cliche has been used a thousand times over, but more than just being hackneyed, the pacing of this tale this felt rushed. The players are one dimensional and there was little to no steamy build-up in either the physical or mental changes inflicted upon the protagonist which deflates the enjoyment of the transformation. Given the genre of this piece of erotica, I feel that makes this a below average effort.

Author's Response: Well thank you for the time and effort to write a review anyway. This was always thought as a short story, as build-up would be better suited for longer tales. That said, still thank you for your review. I hope you'll be able to enjoy the ending and future stories a bit more.

Reviewer: LillyLove Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/20/18 03:55 am Title: Robert's New Body

Besides a few minor grammatical/spelling errors, excellent job! Tantilizing set up and transformation. I can’t wait to see his new “girly thoughts”

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try to do better next chapter. I also can't wait to show you how Robert turns into Robbie... :)

Reviewer: tornadomeister Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/19/18 09:37 pm Title: Robert's New Body

Great so far, would love even more description. I hope there isn't total identity death and he has to struggle with his new body and wants. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: No identity death in this one for sure. Robert is just going to argue a lot with the new Robbie, and it's not likely he'll win! Next chapter we found out more! Thank you for your review!

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