Date: 03/13/19 08:11 pm Title: Story
Hi Lenal, I'm reading Sorority Sisters' Service Project, and decided to check out your other stories.
I thought this one had a very interesting premise, although I'm not a big fan of identity death. It's not too clear how much Brianna and Michele remember about their new lives. The way everyone handles the changes to reality is handled very well. Nice, short story from the perspective of the bystanders. Thanks.
Date: 04/07/18 01:48 am Title: Story
Finally! I've always wanted to see a story like this, of how spectators would view some transformed boy turned girl, and you pulled it off quite admirably. Your story is smart, witty, and re-readable. I also like the implication that every one of these characters potentially could at one point have also been a boy(Natalie could have once been a Nathan, Kendra once could have been a Ken, etc).
Date: 04/06/18 02:38 pm Title: Story
That was a clever story that packs a solid punch. I look forward to seeing your future work. And I'd like to invite you to submit a story for the next mixed tape anthology. (See the afterword to any of the recent mixed tapes for submission info.) This is about the right length for a mixed tape story.
Date: 04/06/18 03:17 am Title: Story
I feel like I've read the story of Brianna somewhere from his perspective. It's interesting seeing it from the ex girlfriend's perspective. IMO I'd love to see a story about Tara's perspective and just why she did this to them two? Like what crime did they commit that a complete and total brainwash was necessary?