Reviews For Storm at Horizon
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: FaithRomeyer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/05/18 02:00 pm Title: Thunder

Finally something good to read. A diverse cast of troubled girls, I'd flirt with all 4 of them in a heartbeat and then get beaten up later. Eila best girl!

...Suddenly got an urge to self insert, excuse my "weeaboosm". Then again the so-called prison they are staying at doesn't look too comfortable and Sally was guity of setting properties on fire in the past, hopefully she won't raze the building down. Is this the second scenario where a bunch of kids got locked up in a place and slowly discover themselves from there? I haven't read your first story in a while.

Author's Response: I suppose there are some similarities, but that's mostly because I find it much easier to focus on characters when they remain in a single environment. Thematically and Narrative there are a lot of differences however, Two Week Coin Toss is centered much more firmly around the characters adjusting and adapting, while this is more along the lines of discovering themselves.

Reviewer: FaithRomeyer Signed Report
Date: 05/05/18 12:20 pm Title: Lightning

“The one upside of this school being a glorified prison is that you have nothing to threaten me with. There are no clubs or activities for you to cancel, there’s no extra curfew you can enact, worst you can do is call one of MY parents, which given my file size I’d imagine you already have.”

Did Vince call Ned's parents to harrass them or something? First time I've ever heard of such a thing.

Author's Response: No, capitalization there was an error on my part, mea culpa.

Reviewer: Lilchelly Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/30/18 07:15 am Title: Thunder

True they were a cute couple. Anyway I'm curious how this one will go. A complete reality change? The fudge.. Did one of the faculty do this? Don't answer me, I'm just speculating, I do that xD

Author's Response: Speculate away, I shall reveal nothing ;) You know, except the stuff in the updates, I guess.

Reviewer: Mr5yy Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/29/18 08:38 am Title: Thunder

Oh dang. I’m really looking forward to how this goes from here.

Author's Response: Glad to hear! I hope you continue to enjoy the story as it comes out.

Reviewer: Eteruna Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/06/18 06:58 am Title: Lightning

As someone who has kept up with the manga, I'm very interested in seeing where this story will take me, and after this first chapter, I'm absolutely hooked!

Reviewer: Lilchelly Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/04/18 09:56 pm Title: Lightning

OMG YES CLEARING UP AFTER THE RAIN! I love that manga! Oooh I wonder if it's a similar reason why they just got their biology changed. I kinda wish one of them would have stayed but it wasn't that kind of manga I guess. I felt bad for the boy who found out he was into men. Also I suppose it'd be really hard to explain "hey mom hey dad, I'm a girl now so... Oh and I have a boyfriend/girlfriend, I'll be in my room!" Yeah that'd be awkward. I still wanted to see what would happen though, oh well.

Author's Response: I positively adore that Manga. As far as the reason that the change exists in this story, it's similar, I think, but not identical. The rain and thunder motif is more a homage, and doesn't play a literal role in the story (as opposed to Clear up after rain, in which it was the catalyst for the changes every time). The closest connection between this story and Clear up is thematic I feel past the references. Also I'm sort of glad that everyone changed back in the end of the Manga, Hazuki and Asumi were such a cute couple!

You must login (register) to review.
TG Storytime uses the eFiction engine and Vanilla discussions. Design by J6P.