Reviews For A Special Costume
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Reviewer: okieohio Signed Report
Date: 10/25/18 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Ok. Just a bit insight. The main character is 6'2" and 190 lbs or so. He is called chubby. For 6'2" I don't think that is at all chubby, especially if he has some muscles. I think he would be in the normal range. If he worked out his drop would be close to 17" when he buys a suit and would need a specially tailored suit to fit well.

Author's Response: Thank you for sharing your point of view! :D I'm not good with imperial system, but I calculated his BMI, and he's very close to be "overweight", so I guess that "chubby" fits him! But I'm from Europe, maybe we have a different perception of weight, I hope you liked the story! :D

Reviewer: Grabber_blue_5oh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/22/18 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 21: The End

Very yummy story

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Reviewer: Grabber_blue_5oh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/21/18 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 13: Dominance

Oh :o

Reviewer: JumpierLotus Signed Report
Date: 04/19/18 10:10 am Title: Chapter 2: Do You Have A Better Idea?

Looks good. By the way, the past tense of 'choose' isn't 'choosed' but 'chose', and the plural of 'foot' is 'feet' instead of 'foots'. Otherwise seems to be quite clean of obvious mistakes, good job!

Author's Response: Thanks for your corrections, I applied them! :D

Reviewer: Amanda Lynn Signed Report
Date: 04/05/18 02:12 am Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Nice story, you did alright, considering English is not your primary language.

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear this, thanks! I hope I'll get better in English :)

Reviewer: clientele Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/04/18 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow, this is amazing

Author's Response: Thank you, really!! :D

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/02/18 11:31 am Title: Chapter 14: Emotions Enlightenment

Awesome!

Author's Response: Thanks! :D I finished the story :)

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/02/18 12:55 am Title: Chapter 12: The Washing Machine.

Moving very well!

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/01/18 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 7: Sweet Dreams

Awesome storyline! I hope he gets the girl!

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