Date: 03/28/18 08:27 pm Title: Chapter One (and only)
Aaaah ... This is the kind of story I love! A little mystery. A touch of conspiracy. A challenge for the reader; 'What do you believe? Is everything as it appears? Or is there so much more beneath surface appearance?' The characters are believable and thus easy to care about. The writing is crisp and the pacing is good. And there's just enough story to pull the reader in, but not so much that it gets in the way. Well done!