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Reviewer: kandijayne Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/02/14 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh yes! You string us along and then, WHAM! I laughed out loud at the outcome. I do rather wonder how the narrator is actually able to give his account in his current state...? But that little difficulty aside, brilliant.

Reviewer: Molten900 Signed Report
Date: 03/08/14 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

Didnt expect that, lol

Reviewer: Zsuzsi Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/11/13 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ha! Nice twist!

Reviewer: Jolene Middleton Signed Report
Date: 08/18/12 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was very good, though it's probably more correctly classed as a transformation story. A steady build up and then a sudden twist.

Reviewer: Andrea DiMaggio Signed starstarhalf-star Report
Date: 08/18/12 01:35 am Title: Chapter 1

What a....treat!

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