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Reviewer: H20_Mel0n Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/24/18 11:22 am Title: Chapter 1 - Waking Up

Nice beginning, waiting for update ^.^

Reviewer: mikerpen Signed Report
Date: 03/29/18 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Waking Up

I liked this story a lot, but the fact that his handwriting was bad is no excuse for the error. Need to change that to make it a software error or somesuch. Any hospital has multiple redundancies to prevent this type of error, and if it occurs, they are in a rush to make the problem go away. The way the story's administration handled it, makes them appear to be an evil corporation.

Reviewer: Day Dreamer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/27/18 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Rise and Shine

Yes more please! "Just getting to the good part" (grin). What a setup... "What could go wrong?" Thanks for patiently working through, exploring, the trajectory and the characters' experiences.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/27/18 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Rise and Shine

He’s not going to change back! Very well done

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/25/18 10:48 am Title: Chapter 4 - Exploration and Disbelief

Very interesting storyline! Looking forward to reading more!!! Well done.

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