Date: 10/30/19 01:56 am Title: Chapter 11 - Misadventures
Heh, glad to see their ichor is awakening. I knew you were going to have to do something to make these two into warriors, but I didn't know what. Good fight scene. I'm starting to feel like they're not doomed after all.
Date: 10/28/19 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 3 - In the Beginning
"Well, I don’t know what I was expecting, thought Andrew. But I’m pretty sure it wasn’t this."
Me neither, lol. Very creative, though. Hmm, I wonder how much you could get for those seeds on eBay? Nah, I think Mom would get really mad. And someone might get stabby with his tiny wooden sword.
Date: 06/28/18 05:46 am Title: Prologue - Notes from the Author
Oh, the twist was the introduction of Alley, which I was not expecting at all but, from that point forward, I was swooning.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! I think Stephanie and Alley are a great couple!
Date: 06/21/18 06:13 am Title: Prologue - Notes from the Author
Was slow to get started, but then about halfway through there was a plot twist that just made my tiny lesbian heart flutter.
Author's Response: Hi Queen of Blades! May I ask what the twist was? I'm glad you're liking the story! Although Part 2 has languished unfinished for a while I will be going back to it, soon.
Date: 05/04/18 08:16 pm Title: Prologue - Notes from the Author
Hey there been a while. Bought all of your books on Amazon totally worth. From an avid reader on Kindle they are not the best source for TG stories suchas the ones in this site due to their nicheness. Over all I'm excited to get updates from you again. Stay healthy and keep up the good work.
Date: 03/24/18 06:54 am Title: Prologue - Notes from the Author
Wow i was way off the mark. Only about 26 chapters or so. Just finished the entire book, at the cost of some sleep :P Loved it! I did feel like it was a little short with only the two quests and that being it, but i enjoyed it nonetheless. I know it sounds stupid, but i think it would be nice if you implemented more hardships into the next story, but balancing that out by giving a great relief which brings things back to normal. I remember all the times while reading imagining things like what would have happened if that apple had un-known side effects, as it seemed it wasn't Sif's apple, but rather another god's apple who sif borrowed it from... Or if someone attacked sif while she was visiting.... Maybe something happens to one of the gods, and they go on their own quest to try and save them.
One thing i thought about during the references to dungeons and dragons was that perhaps all this was a dream, or perhaps it could be past life, or a sign to them that their adventure is only just to begin. That they might wake up and find everything back to normal, and eventually be approached by some of the entities and people who were in there dream, asking them for help against the titans, or even find out that everything was indeed just a dream, and it turns out their life is as they wanted it to be (But, was it always that way? Or is that it was not really a dream after all?)
Although, i'd prefer not to see an ending where that happens, unless they are approached in real life after they dream everything... I couldn't bear not seeing those adorable little sprites in the story!
Lots of interesting ways you can take it, and i don't mean this is bad, but i just feel there are spots that are missing which could add more... It's like you setup hooks in certain spots to expand from, but never did use them. Can't wait to see where it goes either way!
Date: 03/23/18 01:18 am Title: Chapter 6 - Nothing Like a Holiday
Great Read so far!
I actually went to amazon to find the ebook so I didnt have to wait to read the rest lol. the results are still in google but not on amazon anymore. I am looking forward to reading more as chapters come out.
Author's Response: Thanks Jayme! Its been on Amazon for three years, and I tried to drop its price to 0.00$ - but amazon wouldn't let me. Combine that with my annoyance at their kindle only format and I decided to remove it from their site and try publishing on Kobo. Mandate of Heaven part 1 (and Call of the Void part 1) will eventually be here full time, free.
Date: 03/22/18 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Nothing Like a Holiday
Love this! Cant wait for the next chapters!
Author's Response: Thanks SLG! I'm going to be posting 3-4 chapters a day until the novel is done. I really loved writing this story. It was kind of funny - it began as a writing exercise to get past some writers block on Call of the Void part 2 - and it became a storyline of its own. I have Scion RPG Character Sheets for Stephanie, Alley, Billy and the Sprites if you'd like to see them.