Date: 11/17/19 04:26 am Title: Epilogue
Oh well, it was hot while it lasted. Congratulations on finishing the story.
Still... cant help to feel it would have been cool if he could have a way to get back at her. In a way, I feel bad for the kid, who lives her life thinking she has all the answers, just because she has power. I wonder what could have happened if she had a big sister... someone with similar power... maybe if one of her spells malfunctioned...
Date: 09/12/19 04:01 am Title: Fun in the Tub
I think the world needs MORE gratuitous masterbation. Keep it cumming :)
I also like Cindy's subtle form of mind control.
As for whether 'Barbie' is sexy, well hell yes she is.
And if I had to spend time as a doll size and shaped playmate for the kid I'm babysitting, I'd definitely want it to be Stripper Barbie. Forget Cabbage Patches or My Little Pony.
Date: 04/27/19 01:01 am Title: A Harmless Game
"I looked over to where she had fallen out of her chair laughing." Actually... an appropriate reaction.
Dang. Tell me - ARE there real people who think that's a remotely sexy woman? Tiny feet? Vapidity? How is vapidity remotely sexy?
Seriously, do guys like this really exist? I'm not being judgemental, I mean, mushrooms are sexier than what he described.
Fine, whatEVER happens to this guy, he deserves it for being a complete 'tard.
Date: 08/27/18 08:55 am Title: Boy Toy
Okay so, you tagged this "Sexual orientation does not change." But these chapters.... and everything she's doing to this poor kid. Like... this girl's mother is absolutely garbage at her job, her kid is a spoiled rotten brat, who cant even win anything without cheating. Like teach her some integrity, the fudge is wrong with you "mother"?
Author's Response: Thank you for your input. The orientation doesn't exactly 'change' per se. I tried to write it carefully, but he's not actually attracted to guys - it's basically just a sex toy... As for the rest, this takes inspiration from a bunch of stories, most of which were even meaner than I'm being. I also made a mistake in what tags were applied to this, so that has been reflected to hopefully alert readers that it's a fairly one-sided story.
Date: 08/26/18 05:22 am Title: Looking Good and Having Fun
I have read a great many stories on this and other sites, and have only come across 2-3 that involved changing into a 'living' Barbie doll. I don't know why this hasn't been explored more often.
Maybe this could be a series, with other babysitters being magically changed.
I think your writing is terrific, please continue this and other stories.
Author's Response: They're a pretty scarce topic and pretty hard to find on most sites. I've actually written a couple chapters on other interactive sites for them, but every single story I found, there was always something I didn't like, so I decided to make my own. I don't think I'll do a series about this, but I have some other story ideas written down I might get to eventually. I actually wrote 6 chapters in one go when I started this (posted 5, didn't like the 6th), so I'm not sure writing is a healthy habit for me. I'll probably get to the other ones eventually though.
Date: 08/25/18 11:27 pm Title: Looking Good and Having Fun
Author's Response: Hmmmm? Felt really bad ending here, but it was 3 am and I was exhausted. I came back from not posting anything for 5 months with 3 pretty uneventful chapters. Hopefully posting 7 chapters at once makes up for it.
Date: 08/14/18 07:42 pm Title: Showing Up
Why does it take so long? you've given up? 0_0
Author's Response: Writer's block sucks :< Honestly had more or less given up - didn't like how I wanted to continue and didn't want to ruin it. Got a second wind and it should be done soon™.
Date: 05/09/18 12:32 am Title: Showing Up
It seems you, like most creative types, have a harsh inner critic when it comes to your own work. Well, don't think about it too much because your story is great and your writing is fantastic! Keep up the good work and don't give up!
Author's Response: Thank you. I've never really considered myself much of a writer, but wanted to get this down on paper. There are some parts I don't like, but reading over it again (trying to keep consistent is hard) I'm happier with it than most of the stuff I've written. I hope you enjoy the rest.
Date: 04/13/18 01:33 pm Title: A Harmless Game
Could have been a great of story. Stopped as soon as you described his perfect girl. I hate unbelievable exaggeratedly sexualized stories. Some might like it but it's not for me. Good luck.
Author's Response: Thank you for your input. I've read some stories with exaggerated aspects that I was a big fan of (basically all of Wyrdey) and wanted to emulate. Forced it a bit too much, and if I could I'd like to rewrite part of the story, but kinda late for that. It gets toned down some, but probably still isn't your kind of story.
Date: 04/10/18 12:28 pm Title: It's Not Whether You Win or Lose
If you need ideas for later it would be hot to introduce a Ken doll for Barbie. Maybe kinda an unspeaking kinda Zombie-like intelligence doll man, atomically correct and functional, that just constantly tries to seduce, fondle and penetrate Barbie.
If the character is gonna stay BBarbie it would be awesome if by the end of the story she is Cindys new toy "Realistic Pregnant Barbie!"
Great story so far!
Author's Response: Thank you for the input. Very interesting idea, but unfortunately I'm not super interested in the pregnant stories, so I doubt I'd be that great at writing them.
Date: 04/02/18 09:39 pm Title: Showing Up
Logged in for the first time in probably over a year just to say this is very hot! Can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: Thank you, that means a lot. Chapters 5-8 are kind of a lull unfortunately, but will be ramping back up soon.
Date: 03/19/18 12:48 am Title: Showing Up
wow! this is a super hot read! hoping for more
Author's Response: Thanks. I didn't want to be one of those people that left an uncompleted story, but then couldn't figure out where to go. Should be finished soon, hopefully.
Date: 03/19/18 12:05 am Title: Showing Up
Pretty hot so far. A slight recommendation, though? Do give him a fighting chance, it gets a little boring if she always wins.
Author's Response: It was kind of extreme I'll admit. Unfortunately, I'm not really that into fair fights in these kinds of stories. Part of the plot was inspired by The Corporate Mole and Bimbo Barbie the Youtube Star (neither of which are very fair).
Date: 03/18/18 10:42 am Title: Pizza Time
Wow. This story got interesting really fast. Got to say, I’m quite excited for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Glad to hear, sorry for the delay. There were some things I couldn't figure out how to continue, so next couple chapters might not be super interesting, but it will ramp up again, promise.