Date: 03/19/18 02:31 am Title: Chapter 1
Ya! Super duper mega awesome!!! Great worldbuilding. Loved the characters. Not much more to say say aside from even more praise!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! Coming from an author of your talent, that's high praise :-)
Date: 03/18/18 11:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Thank you Tess for this lovely story. The world that you have built was cunningly close enough to our own near future that it was totally believable.. I loved the digging up lost scrap garden furniture detail! The romantic feel between Riley and Miri was just right too and I loved the technology.. Girls can do engineering and I wish I had just as my Dad wanted me to! The whole story has the feel of Iain Banks about it and from me that is the highest praise!
Author's Response: I can't tell you how honored I am to be compared to the author of the Culture series. Thank you, and glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 03/17/18 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful story, Tess!
Author's Response: Thank you Monique! Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 03/17/18 11:04 am Title: Chapter 1
This was a very sweet little story. I liked the sprinkling of details about the society without a big infodump, and the balance between romance and technical stuff was quite good. The ending gaveva nice sense of closure while reinforcing that people are allowed to still have doubts. Great job! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I had to really rein myself in so I just didn't spend the entire story gushing about the world I'd built :-P