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Reviewer: Lilchelly Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/14/18 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 6

OMG YAY! She's getting better at controlling it! This is wonderful! I hope she can change her home or else what would happen if that house was destroyed or abandoned?!

Reviewer: Day Dreamer Signed Report
Date: 03/13/18 12:56 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm enjoying this story more than I wish I was (grin) because parts are unfair or painful, also the TG angle is just "there" and not the main focus. But your storytelling and dialogue are top-notch as you take us for a ride through "it could be like this, if that actually happened."

Reviewer: Lilchelly Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/11/18 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 5

Yikes that's absolutely horrifying. Being forced to keep your house spotless, even a tiny mess and you're freaking out. Poor Melissa... I hope she finds some way to fix that. This is an absolutely HORRIBLE compulsion. It's like she's been turned into a 50s housewife from stepford. I feel so bad for her...

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/11/18 11:48 am Title: Chapter 4

ESP for cleaning, lol

Reviewer: Lilchelly Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/11/18 09:03 am Title: Chapter 4

It just gets worse and worse... I hope they can find something to help Tim with. Like will Tim be able to attend any school with a compulsion this bad? I worry for her...

Reviewer: Lilchelly Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/11/18 08:52 am Title: Chapter 3

Jeez... Tim got a really harsh twist. The mother must feel awful that if she hadn't pushed Tim to clean so much this never would have happened. Or maybe she doesn't, I don't know, it seems like you can NEVER tell when a twist is going to happen. It seems pretty hard to engineer one, but it is possible (as some of morpheus stories have proven)

Reviewer: Amanda Lynn Signed Report
Date: 03/10/18 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good story! Why do I get the feeling there is a storm brewing between Steve, Mindy and Jack? Or at least Steve and Mindy? I get the feeling that Jack will try to settle things with Steve?

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/08/18 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 2

Very interesting compulsion!

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/08/18 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 2

Very interesting compulsion!

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/07/18 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great direction for the next part of ur storylines! Well done

Reviewer: Lilchelly Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/06/18 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well this has a lot of potential. I absolutely love that the daddy cared to ask Tim how she felt about her gender. So rare to see in twist stories, they usually just go the "biology is destiny" route which irks me a bit I suppose. I often wonder what would happen if someone twisted into a different biology but still had the same gender. That sounds horrifying (given I've lived it I'd know xD)...

Author's Response: There is a secondary character who is something like that in "Twisted Throwback".

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