Date: 03/13/18 12:56 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm enjoying this story more than I wish I was (grin) because parts are unfair or painful, also the TG angle is just "there" and not the main focus. But your storytelling and dialogue are top-notch as you take us for a ride through "it could be like this, if that actually happened."
Date: 03/11/18 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 5
Yikes that's absolutely horrifying. Being forced to keep your house spotless, even a tiny mess and you're freaking out. Poor Melissa... I hope she finds some way to fix that. This is an absolutely HORRIBLE compulsion. It's like she's been turned into a 50s housewife from stepford. I feel so bad for her...
Date: 03/11/18 08:52 am Title: Chapter 3
Jeez... Tim got a really harsh twist. The mother must feel awful that if she hadn't pushed Tim to clean so much this never would have happened. Or maybe she doesn't, I don't know, it seems like you can NEVER tell when a twist is going to happen. It seems pretty hard to engineer one, but it is possible (as some of morpheus stories have proven)
Date: 03/06/18 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well this has a lot of potential. I absolutely love that the daddy cared to ask Tim how she felt about her gender. So rare to see in twist stories, they usually just go the "biology is destiny" route which irks me a bit I suppose. I often wonder what would happen if someone twisted into a different biology but still had the same gender. That sounds horrifying (given I've lived it I'd know xD)...
Author's Response: There is a secondary character who is something like that in "Twisted Throwback".