Reviews For Tournament Day
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Reviewer: Griffin Signed Report
Date: 01/20/19 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm going to have to go with the consensus

"pleasantly wishful thinking!"

...or did I mean "wistful"?

Reviewer: ForeverEgg Signed Report
Date: 11/12/18 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 2

cute! CUTE CUTE CUTE CUTE CUTE!
same tephra, same.

Reviewer: Dunnere Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/03/18 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

Surprisingly sweet.

Reviewer: Lilchelly Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/02/18 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 2

This is so what I'd do if possible. Smart girl!

Author's Response: Heh, I kind of figured it's what a lot of us would do :-P

Reviewer: Saklad Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/02/18 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 2

Didn't expect the conclusion to be IRC. Interesting choice!

Author's Response: Yeah, it kind of surprised me, too- but it just kind of clicked in my head.

Reviewer: Trismegistus Shandy Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/02/18 08:15 am Title: Chapter 1

That was a sweet, clever story. I didn't notice any serious problems with it; use of digits instead of written-out number words for small numbers like eight, for instance, and improper dashes (you used single dash with a space after but not before instead of an em dash or double dash, with consistent spacing). But the story itself? Very good. Thank you.

Author's Response: Yeah, I didn't really edit it as thoroughly as I should've- but I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: 930310 Signed Report
Date: 03/02/18 05:02 am Title: Chapter 2

This chapter is just a mess.

Reviewer: 930310 Signed Report
Date: 03/02/18 05:01 am Title: Chapter 1

Meh, this behaviour sounds unrealistic. Some grammatical kinks that you'll need to fix as well.

Author's Response: You *clearly* have never spent time around a trans girl :-P

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