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Reviewer: Lailaluvs00 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/25/18 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 9

Very interesting and thoughtful thanks for sharing

Reviewer: GinNC Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/07/18 11:54 am Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed The Clinical Trial. This story, however, actually touched me. I felt a sense of empathy with the main characters. Thank you for sharing this.

Author's Response: Thank you! That really means a lot!

Reviewer: blue98 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/05/18 06:05 am Title: Chapter 9

Great, as always. I love the exploration of what to do with immortality... Good, sweet, short.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I was concerned about the reception since the tone was so different, but sometimes the story tells you where it wants to go. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Artemesia Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/03/18 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 2

This is just so exquisite. I really get off on the mental aspects of turning into bimbo and often think you would have moments like this if it happened to you. Perfectly captured in writing. Brava! - A

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love exploring the idea of a consensual loss of control, of choosing to have one’s decision making ability taken away for a time. I feel like it could be addictive, and I might just go into that in more detail in some future story. Thanks again for reading!

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