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Reviewer: Lilchelly Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/07/18 08:18 pm Title: The Shadows Amongst Us

What in the absolute... what...huh... what just happened?! She killed everyone? Like not just megan but EVERYONE?

Author's Response: I have to admit, took myself by a bit of a surprise the forward direction I am taking, but yes she does, nearly. It's still very unclear I understand but its still too early in the book to reveal to you what's really happening... but for the sake of it, her powers are extremely volatile and dangerous ... what you saw was only a glimpse of the true potential of what she is capable of, I know it sounds crazy, but its how I decided to take it. I find it actually, quite scary. I might as well tell you as well. because well, I'm feeling generous and hoping it won't spoil the plot too much, buuuuut she actually has the ability to manipulate gravity, when she was younger this was misinterpreted as telekinesis, and being young her powers were too.

Reviewer: Mr5yy Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/19/18 06:18 am Title: Mutiny

Good addition. A nice amount of information and story to keep you wanting for another chapter, especially with that cliffhanger.

Reviewer: Lilchelly Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/18/18 08:58 pm Title: Mutiny

There's a lot of potential here, I cant wait to read more. So far I'm not sure what's going on but you're slowly building a world and I imagine next chapter might have some more of what's going on.

Author's Response: exactly :). The next chapter will explain a lot more and i'm sure you'll love it.

Reviewer: Misaania Signed Report
Date: 02/06/18 07:55 am Title: The Orphanage

I'll trust you on that one. Thanks for being so receptive. I'll watch your story for a while and see what it develops into. For the time being, I'll withhold my true judgments until I have a large part to bite into.

Author's Response: Sorry for the latency in a new chapter, I took the time doing a variety of of things. I also had to create the plot for me to go off of, but anyways. New chapter today which will be exciting!

Reviewer: Misaania Signed Report
Date: 02/05/18 03:38 pm Title: The Orphanage

Oh, boy. If this is a unique story, which considering the fact there are powers in it, it comes off rather questionable, you should try not copying one of the most famous story names on the site. Especially considering I am one of the writers and personally know the first writer of it. I strongly suggest changing the name.

Author's Response: Woops ahhah, sorry, look I didn't mean to I will probably fiddle with he Title, and I needed one so. Hey, honestly just read it as it develops and see what you think about it. I will go changing the title then. :P

Reviewer: storylovinggamer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/02/18 04:16 pm Title: The Orphanage

interesting, reminds me of forgotten

Reviewer: Rellawing Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/02/18 02:59 pm Title: The Orphanage

The change must have already taken place... at least I'm guessing? *laugh*

Author's Response: Only a small taste of what is to come, but a little secrete. There will be a gender change later on in the story and it will be quite the paradox ;)

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