Reviews For Evelyn
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Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/22/19 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 2

Looks like Ander stumbled upon some kind of a 'Stargate' and upon pushing through it, wound up female in a parallel universe. Great start I hope you are able to continue.

Reviewer: storylovinggamer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/02/18 01:17 am Title: Chapter 1

Loved the chapter! I am hoping the next chapter wont take as long, especially since fantasygirl has kinda dropped off the face of the earth for a unspecified amount of time... There's that elf itch that needs to be filled! :D

Reviewer: naughtyleper Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/30/18 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 2

Got potential definitely, can see a little plotonic relationship happening between them already.

Look forward to more

Author's Response: Thnx for letting me know. Yeah, I was definitely aiming for a platonic relationship because you don't find that kind of a relationship in the real world these days, or even if you do, it's quite rare. And the idea of a person being stuck inside you is quite strange and yet it opens up many possibilities. Hope you read my next chapter. Bye!

Reviewer: storylovinggamer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/27/18 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

i like it. great start

Reviewer: TForc Signed Report
Date: 01/27/18 01:31 am Title: Chapter 1

Ok, I have to ask: was your intro inspired by the beginning of the Eragon books ? If so, you definitely reproduced the feel of that scene :)

Author's Response: Aye, I wanted Ander's story to start the same way. But this is by no means a copy of Paolini's work. This story is my own and features my own characters, but there may be some inspiration drawn when it comes to writing the description. I hope it answers your question. I'm sorry I didn't mention this in the chapter notes.

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