Date: 12/02/18 01:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved the chapter! I am hoping the next chapter wont take as long, especially since fantasygirl has kinda dropped off the face of the earth for a unspecified amount of time... There's that elf itch that needs to be filled! :D
Date: 11/30/18 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 2
Got potential definitely, can see a little plotonic relationship happening between them already.
Look forward to more
Author's Response: Thnx for letting me know. Yeah, I was definitely aiming for a platonic relationship because you don't find that kind of a relationship in the real world these days, or even if you do, it's quite rare. And the idea of a person being stuck inside you is quite strange and yet it opens up many possibilities. Hope you read my next chapter. Bye!
Date: 01/27/18 01:31 am Title: Chapter 1
Ok, I have to ask: was your intro inspired by the beginning of the Eragon books ? If so, you definitely reproduced the feel of that scene :)
Author's Response: Aye, I wanted Ander's story to start the same way. But this is by no means a copy of Paolini's work. This story is my own and features my own characters, but there may be some inspiration drawn when it comes to writing the description. I hope it answers your question. I'm sorry I didn't mention this in the chapter notes.