Date: 01/23/18 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 9
An excellent story Ashli..I love the way that Tom starts to enjoy the plus sides of being a girl..I too remember the first time I received a bouquet of flowers..Is there any chance that you could give us a sequel? I'd just love to hear where Claire will go next. Poor Tom..I think that Claire is his future?
Date: 01/22/18 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ok, this is a nice story, but it feels pretty drawn out, with nothing much happening really.
It feels more like an intro or first chapter (instead of 9) than a story.
I was really surprised it suddenly ended and was marked complete.